Reviews for The Chameleon
july1234 chapter 1 . 5/26
I keep coming back to this update! :)
Sasha chapter 4 . 4/6
I don't know how to play poker.
Sasha chapter 2 . 4/5
I love Rapunzel.
99fandoms chapter 18 . 3/1
This was so good! Was late to my tattoo appointment because of it. I hope you come back and finish it
Guest chapter 18 . 11/30/2019
Just got done reading,love this take on rapunzela and consider continuing this story.(Looks like I'm not the only one with this opinion}
chiyokira chapter 18 . 11/29/2019
this is really great! i was totally absorbed, especially in the last chapter. are you not updating this anymore? best regards from a fan :)
Caver Floyd chapter 18 . 8/1/2019
Good story. Clockwork Pascal is fun.

Decided to look you up because Fabulist mentioned you in a lot of their notes.
Erika chapter 18 . 3/22/2019
Welp, it’s six years later. Time for another chapter?
Guest chapter 18 . 8/5/2018
I don’t know if you still read the reviews, but this is amazing. I’ve read Super (3x), this twice, and What You Don’t Know at least 5x. They are all so different, and so well written. I hope one day you come back to finish this one, and I hope that whatever you’re doing, you’re still writing!
Risika Karew chapter 18 . 5/17/2017
Omg I didn't realize this story wasn't complete and I see you haven't updated in awhile! _ please please come back and finish the story! it's really great and i would love to read the rest of it!
Imagi chapter 18 . 5/11/2017
This is such a wonderful story! The steampunk AU is really creative, and I was practically at the edge my seat with the last few chapters. I'm excited to find out what happens next. Well done!
ZeroImagination chapter 18 . 12/13/2016
Oh my god, how could you leave this unfinished? I was so enthralled, I forgot I was reading fan fiction and that that was even a possibility!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
I just keep coming back... I've lost count of the number of times I've re-read this story. It's so beautiful. I love Flynn's point of view, in all your stories really. You write so well! Please update :')
malfoy lea chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
I don't exactly know why my brain decided to suddenly get hooked on Tangled - Fanfictions, but here I am. Your work is amazing! I loved innnocent Rapunzel in "What you don't know" and the more fierce, but broken one in "Sunshine". That one was intense, and I am fascinated by your talent to show Rapunzel's distress, and how you made me feel it by sewing several layers of her memories together to a big ugly mess of thoughts and fears. "Super" was weird; I'm not even sure I got all the references, but it was great as well. Also, your visualisation is pretty well. Even if I imagined someone crawling on a hot pipe beneath the ceiling in a tunnel, I wouldn't know how to describe it. I will read this now, because Steampunk Rapunzel also sounds great. live long and prosper.
rational chapter 18 . 2/29/2016
NOOOOOOOO! I got all engaged in this story, and you didn't finish it, and now it's been years, so you never will! At least it didn't end abruptly with one or both of them dying, as I was sort of afraid it would when I realized there was not enough space to have a happy ending.

But thank god, at least you got to the part where the queen realized there was a chance that Rapunzel was her missing daughter, instead of knocking down the tower and killing her. Flynn's sacrifice wasn't for nothing. I loved that moment when the queen looked at him and he thought for a second he was looking at Rapunzel and then he thought he was losing his mind. And he is in fact so worried about her that it wouldn't even be that weird for him to be seeing her everywhere. I also loved the moment where he finally put together that she was the lost princess.

I'm enjoying the way he's fighting the obvious interpretation that what he's doing right now is driven by his feelings for Rapunzel. A third party observer, the guard, thinks his story sounds like he's trying to spin some ridiculous story about the magical transformative powers of love, but he's not consciously trying to do that at all. He doesn't think love has anything to do with it. He just has to save at her, at any cost.

I'm curious what the queen thinks about his behavior. It's clear from the moment he says the deal he wants to make has nothing to do with leniency for him that she knows something odd is going on. And then he shared his information about Gothel once they'd already decided to go save her.

I so wish I could know how things play out. I'm curious about what else Gothel is going to pull, and exactly what's going to happen to cause Rapunzel's hair to get cut. And will she have to save Flynn? How's she going to react to all this when she wakes up? When is the chameleon going to play his recording of Flynn saying goodbye to her? What does the queen think about what's going on? Will we ever meet Max? Man, this sucks.
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