I enjoy this take on the events of FF XIII it's refreshing. Please continue writing.

This is nice can't wait til the next chapter!

Ichibayashi , Out

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

Another wonderful chapter. Though admittedly, I did find the thoughts a bit jarring. While it's fine to put them in italics, smooshing the words together really threw off the flow of the story. I suggest spacing them out like normal.

Anyhow, I really like how you're characterizing Lightning and Fang. It just seems so natural that way. :)

I look forward to the next chapter.

I'm enjoying the insight you bring forth in this novelization. You have me eagerly awaiting the next update.

Really enjoying this so far. Hope you update soon :)

I love the depth that you're adding to these scenes. And the moments where Fang sees a flash of concern in Light's eyes and when they find a moment of fun racing each other through the streets-priceless. I now assume them as canon, lol.

Thanks for the Update. Update when you can.

Nice story so far. Update when you can.

Can't wait for the next update!

~~CloudGazer15

I love reading Flight stories. I've been looking for one that tells it from th beginning and the ones I find aren't that great. But I love how yours is going. :D It's fantasitic! Can't wait to read more.

Yeeeeeeeeeees, and finally we'll watch the Flight story from the very beginning!

I'm so excited, can't wait for your update ;)!

I have to admit, I usually don't read stories where people practically retell the FFXIII game, may it be with OCs or not. But this one, I did and I'm glad I did. I really like what you're doing with it. You've kept the characters perfect and the in game dialogue doesn't seem awkwardly put in like in other stories I've come across.

I look forward for the next chapter. :)

The legendary Brittana writer EverShadow is penning a FLight story? *faints*

Dreams really do come true. xD

This is a great start! I love the way you're filling in the blanks between their first scenes together and painting a backdrop that makes the game dialogue make more sense, too.

I can't wait to see where you go with this! Normally I wait a few chapters to fave, but I have faith in you, lol.