Great chapter! The insight and Analyse of their team constellation was new to me and I truly never thought about it. But your approach was so logical. Wondering if Shino would be involved with Hinata or not. I can’t really tell what he wanted to express when he kept quiet. Brilliant !

I like how you express Kibas feelings and thoughts and weave if it in your story. It’s really a pleasure to read this story. I cannot believe that his mother just kicked him out, although she knows that he did not do it on purpose. I hope she will come around. Kiba needs a warm family!

Love the story so far! Hope they will catch the man who did it to our beautiful couple. Hinata is quite calm here , I am wondering if this encounter will leave a scar or not.

OMG! I really loved your story, is one of my favorites! I love KibaHina and I'm glad that they finished happy!

This fic seems really promising! And I may have a sick mind, but I would have liked to read a detailed rape scene with Hinata awake and both aware of everything happening. This would have amplified the horror of the situation. Looking forward to read the continuation!

Wow this is such a powerful story. That last paragraph really got to me. And the message of love and forgiveness resonate all throughout. While I have always been a fan of this pairing, you really make it stand out and shine. This may be one of if not the best KibaHina story I have ever read and I'm so glad you wrote it! I'd love another chapter fic about these two but I'll take what I can get. Being a fan of non canon pairings can be a bit frustrating at times ya know?

Just a quick comment about your author's note. Perhaps the hamburger and milk was like a once a month treat or something. Hamburgers can be healthy if you cook them a certain way and some dogs can digest milk. Granted these are things he probably doesn't eat every day, or even a few times a month. Milk once in a blue moon won't kill him.

This story was so beautifully written, I dont even have the words to express how much I loved it! You're amazing. Seriously.

this is my 3rd time reading this fanfic and i would like to thank you for writing this amazing story. every chapters are written very detailed and all the emotions ive had while reading them made me ship kibahina more. youre very talented!

I have to say this is hands down my favorite fanfic I have ever read. I've read it all the way through I think at least three times? It is so good and I love your writing style. I follow several of your other fics. I love your characterization of Hinata as quiet and strong, but not wimpy or pathetic. I absolutely adore Kiba in this. He is funny and hard working and earnest and self-sacrificing and loyal...all the things we see in the manga and anime, but he never is highlighted enough. You do your characters justice, with realistic dialogue, emotions, sentence variety, and such beautiful grammar and so few typos. Your works are joys to read. :)

like I said you have made me a Kiba/Hinata fan with this story. don't be surprised with my late review 3yrs from this story as Naruto is animation that is new to most of us South Africans ascwe are only on Naruto Shippuden rescue of Gaara.

my favorite chapter thus far as it is great for the protagonists to share a fun filled day with their friends.

not the most erotic sexual act I've read but one of the most believable. its exciting reading a story on Kiba/Hinata as they are not y favored couple unlike Shika/Temari&Naru/Sakura. your story is making me into a believer.

This story was awesome!

While I'm reviewing, I had to mention... one thing that kind of bothered me was the idea that the Inuzuka, who are so loyal and caring to her pack, would result in Kiba's mom disowning him because of the issue, PARTICULARLY because the whole thing was out of his control. But I guess that bit is kind of central to the plotline so it makes sense... it kind of bothers me as the lone detail that isn't faithful to the story whereas all the rest of your characters, personalities, scenes, settings, customs, pretty much everything is.