Okie dokie I didnt really read this bore of a chapter but you're still an intermediate writer

Hey! Hey! Almighty sensi here! Keep up the good work intermediate writer!

This chapter title says it all! Man its soooooo cute and you are now a intermediate writer!

F/F fic?
Oh no... Oh well. It's to good to put down.

This was amazing, by far the best story involving Gilda I have read yet. If only she were to redeem herself in the show, ah well. Beautifully written, only minor mistakes like hitting the wrong key or something. I absolutly loved it and will be checking out anything else you write.

HA HA! Pen is Quill!

Gilda and lies is an amazing story! It left me wanting so much more ;D it was clever, funny and heart-warming. I love how the author gave his own twist on the "Mane-Six" and added some well placed OC's. I can't wait to read more by Kyle!

Despite what happens... just know... i hope none of your chapters are deleted, for they are all wonderful gifts to us... and i must be greedy in saying i don't want to give them back.

- One Psychopathic Maniacal Fox

Wait they...kissed?

A friendkinda kiss like how sisters do it OR a lesb0 kind of kiss? D:

Wait they...kissed?

A friendkinda kiss like how sisters do it OR a lesb0 kind of kiss? D:

Im lovin it! Good story by the way! Gilda is mah fave character anyway :p

I have a good deal of free time ahead of me for the next month, so i will gradly throw my hat in as an editor.

An interesting take on the holiday as well as a nice look at the main character and some of the other stars of your continuity.

Very nice update, and great to see you posting as always! You aren't the only one who has had productivity halt for a while, but it's nice to see you back!

The whole scenario here was very heartwarming and believable, and Dash's little prank was amazing. Something like this would totally happen, and seeing Gilda start to feel bad for her cynical nature after being lied to was hilarious. You've done a great job of making Gilda into a character that isn't just a throwaway. Dash is a great partner for her, and their whole dynamic continues to work wonders for this story.

Impressive job with the origin of Santa Clops. Lots of nice little details, especially the inclusion of the original Wonderbolts. Had the Hearth Warming episode gone a more Christmasy route, I'd put money on it being something like this. Everything you came up with fits well in canon, and Words continues to be a wonderful OC.

Also, I love how you structured this. The beginning and ending in particular were a nice change of pace from normal stories, and the narrated tale was nice as well. All of the above gave a nice holiday feel, and I love what you did with this chapter in general. Great work, and may you have a pleasant end of the year. See you in 2012!

Great as always. More frequent updates would be awesome but I realize you most likely have a life outside of pleasing us (and I don't want the quality to drop just for more frequent posts). Keep up the good work.