A great story,from two of my favorite authors.!

I just re-read this story. It is really excellent. Thank you

Are you gonna continue? I feel that this needs to continue

Adorableness is over 9000 :)

Heh, Beth and Alexis scheming! Nothing could withstand that :)

Gah! Love Alexis so much. She's the best.

Man, Kate is a mess. That was a well-written scene, though.

You write Alexis so wonderfully!

Did you just make a cereal commercial joke? That joke had no right to make me laugh the way it did :)

I have NO idea how you made an OC so adorable and interesting, so fast. Seriously, this chapter was amazing.

fantastic story love beth too

This is such a delightful take on this period of the show. I love Beth and the way she plays off both Castle and Kate; and she has her own intriguing backstory too, which I find fascinating.

Glad it's a complete story too, because I would have been a little shattered if you guys hadn't ended it!

Now back to it!

Somehow, I don't recall having ever read this story but I really enjoyed it. Amazing how much difference one extra character has the possibility of making!

Amazing AU. I liked Beth a lot! I was impressed by the use of Alexis' character - I think she often gets a hard time in fan fiction so it is refreshing to see her have a positive effect on a story.

I adore this story but this chapter especially spoke to me. Kate's vulnerability is so beautifully written. I love Kate's sister and can see it as a reality, as another side of Kate.

So well done!

So I think I'm going to read the stories you write with SC first because all the ones I've read so far are just soooo good.