Wonderful wonderful wonderful! That was an amazing chapter and end to the story!
Can't wait to see the squeal... I better not have to wait long! Bc cam knows where you live and may pay your house a visit just to post it for you! Xoxo

First Greek: It's Μεταβείτε στην Ταρταρος(Go to Tartarus); not Μεταβείτε στην Τρίπολης(Go to Tripoli).
Second Greek: Σκότωσε το τώρα(Kill it now!) is fine. Just a little scary though. Anyway still a good story. Sorry if this made you ticked or something, I'm just really protective over Greek and it's my favorite language.

Very well written! I really enjoyed it! I enjoyed the quick update but would apperciate it if you would do more like that :P cam is going to take over the world. Starting with angel. *-*
So may your quill be sharp and your hand fast! (So you can update fast)

cool story

No I did not enjoy that cliffy. How dare you end like that. :( cam will come into your house with angel just because of that. Btw angel is plotting your death...
Good writing and I still love the story. Now just update soon or else cam WILL come and eat all your pizza. And angel. Yummy.

Mmmmmmm... Pizza. I can just taste it. Yummy. Pizza. Pizza. Pizza. Yummmmmmm. Pizza. Yay. :D

Anywhoo onto the review... XP
Good job! I liked that pizza part and that other part about pizza. Yay. :)
Good writing and I really want some pizza. Ya. XP update soon! And bring me some pizza. :)

This is a very angry review. Your updates are too slow, so I'm sending CAM over to your house to speed you up. Your story is really good but you need to stop ending in cliff hangers! :( anywhoo... Spongebob says hi

O_o cliffie? Really? Jerk.
Anyhoo great chapter. Very suspenseful and well written. Now onto the threats. XPizza
Update soon. I know where you live. If you dot update soon bellatrix will tell smurfette about the lorax. Good enough threat? Mwahahah. I'm evil. That's what you get for leaving a cliffie. XP

Good. Very good. Now just update sooner or CAM will come to your house and start stalking you. Then he will climb through your window and eat you, (nomnomnom) and then regurgitate you and force you to update again ASAP. (Good enough threat? If not, ) and if that doesn't do the trick, I will personally come break into your house, and force you. (Love ya!) ;)

this is great update soon

You lie

Aldora and Leo would be awesome together!:)

Gross ! A & p not a good couple! But I NEEEEED MORE

awesome idea!

:D
You finally posted. Thanks.
:D