Well this was certainly amusing. ;)

Omg! Such a cute fic! All the characters were spot on. Totally in character. 3 I especially loved how the bond between Tifa and Lightning developed. She wasn't petty to the end but understanding. And omg, the idea of Lightning turning him down when he asked her out was epic XD sounds exactly like something she'd do! And being good at poker hahaha. Man. I will remember this fic forever *w* your writing is detailed, crisp and beautiful! Thank you for a great fic. I hope there is a sequel?

Very good story. Well done! ;)

I think I laughed more than I should have.
Thank God my mother didn't woke up from all that silent laughing and inhailing (to try to stop laughing).
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL, by the way.
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WOW longest fic EVER

would this be spoilers to the prequel of this story? :O

hahah which female character of final fantasy didn't have their natural teeth..., as far as i concern they all have their natural teeth and beauty especially nowadays with the very new born character right now ... protoganist character is very strong,powerful,immortal, independent and inspiring compare to older female character of ff along time ago

Gotta say, I like this story a lot. There were SOME mistakes; a new paragraph should be started when different characters speak, but this is only a minor mistake and really is my only complaint. I think you did a good job of keeping everyone in character (I can't completely vouch for Lightning, though, as I don't know her as well as the others, but I like how you wrote her.) Tifa's overall reaction to Lightning and Cloud's relationship might have been SLIGHTLY exaggerated; I don't know if Tifa would've been quite that hostile in response, because she is typically shown to be calm and forgiving, but I can see why she would react that way. Having unrequited feelings for Cloud all these years, unable to form the kind of connection she truly wanted with him, then him being gone for three years, only to come home with some girl she's never even seen before and find out he's MARRIED to her, well, yeah, I can see why she'd be kind of pissed off. She definitely overreacted to the situation, but I get it, and I do think you did a good job with that.

Looking at what Timberwolf said, I do have to agree in a way. Not to his comment about the ending; I do think Tifa would see how ridiculous she's being and would reconcile with Lightning, because Tifa is a forgiving person, but the idea of more tension and hostility between them would've been a good addition. Realistically, though, you portrayed them the right way; Tifa may be jealous of Lightning, but her overall forgiving personality would keep her from physically harming the girl, and Lightning may VERBALLY fight with Tifa, but would not be the type to pounce when insulted, being more calm, like Cloud.

I also love how you played the crossover, too, and made it seem believable. Lightning didn't suddenly poof into Cloud's world or vice versa; I could actually dig the idea of the games being in the same universe. I also love the little Final Fantasy VIII cameo at the end there, because I am also a bit of an Irvine/Tifa fan. ;3 Anyway, I liked the story. Despite some mistakes, you did a good job. c: Keep writing~

thundered Lightning *snicker snicker*

I enjoyed this, and I'd like to see if you could expand this story further.

This was a great story, ignore that idiot reviewer before mine, the fact that they don't have a story themselves just shows u how pathetic they are. Keep up the good work.

What the hell was that? The ending sucked balls. There's no way in heaven or hell that Tifa would've warmed up to a complete and total stranger after having gotten over the little ordeal with Cloud and Light HOURS before! And there should've been WAY more aggressive action between Light and Tifa. Those two were ready to break eachother's necks and you didn't even give them a chance to. This whole thing totally blows. And I don't know what this guy's talking about... How is this so "Perfect" again? Seriously...

whoa! that was A PERFECT STORY! you should write more because YOU HAVE TALENT! I LOVE THE MOMENT WHEN Lightning revealed her real name to Tifa! it was very touching! i love Cloud/Lightning romance too! what else? it was just fabulous! all of it!