This was so good! I world really love a sequel

I'm sorry, but I can't continue reading this story. Those jumbled tenses and frankly atrocious grammar take all the fun out of the reading ecxperience. This story needs to be edited thoroughly.

Nice and promising chapter. But I just read your other Conan-story, and I'm a bit confused: That one was flawless concerning the use of tenses, this one is a jumbled mess that disrupts the reading flow. You may want to prove-read it or use a good beta before the upload.

One word to say here.

"Nice."

Soooo cute I love the whole big diamond as an engagement present
Keep on the writes

haha, this was adorable and fun, thank you! Though I don't really understand why Shinichi is able to grant immortality, I still love how you incorporated the shrinking and poison. However, I must admit that I'm quite curious as to the stories of how he acquired his 'children' and why they call him father. Sure he's older, but did he take them in as kids, or did he simply tell them all his secret? Or where they all originally apart of the Organization that was after him (suspected), and then he saved them? But saved them how, and from what?

*lol* The idea of the Black Organization serving Shinichi is pretty damn funny. In general, though, I really like how you put this together and gave everyone a role. And the happy ending is definitely a plus. :)

This story was really interesting! Making Shinichi immortal and the BO his 'children' is something I've never read before. Kaito is really cute in this story and the epiloque was hilarious! Those two as horrifying kids is perfect. xD Well done! :3

This is great! The only odd thing I noticed was that you switched between present and past tense a lot. Aren't fics usually in past tense?

At the start until we got to chapter 8 I was all OMG THIS IS SUCH A CRAZY STORY YET I LOVE IT but then the cold hard truth was thrown on me :( but still it's such a cool story and a cute one (apart from all the death but meh) at first I thought this'd be one where it's like it destroys me and like there both Pandora and it's like all creepy cause there like related and stuff but no

Oh ... my condolences (don't know why I said that) I now feel very lucky that my sister and I agree that we love yaoi and are big fans of KaiShin!

Omg this is brilliant! I would NEVER have thought of this idea but boy does it work! And the whole thing about the BO being Shinichi's kids! HAAAAH actually fits sooo well! I've always though that I really like them way more than I probably should seeing as they're the enemy and all. I love the idea of Shinichi and Kaito running around the globe for the rest of eternity, wrecking havoc upon the world! Hahaha, and the Kaitou KID and Night Baron truly are immortal phantoms now! Ooooh that thought gets me way more excited than in should! But I'm glad that someone else thought of Shinichi taking on the name of The Night Baron as a vigilante, I thought I'd have to write my own story before the idea came up! Thanks for proving me wrong! :D You're brilliant! Thank you!

Love! So much love for this! :3 Especially with how smitten Shinichi was at the beginning (and well, now). Oh, you write the cutest Kaito ever! Keep your eye on this boy, Shinichi But great writing! Awesome plot and you tied up the loose ends as well.

Hopefully we'll see more multi-chapter fics from you, eh? 3

Haha, what a cute fic ;)

I love it. Great job. I hope that youll continue to write ShinKai pairing stories. See you soon.- - 0 0