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Tat was cute.

I love this story. It is so sad. But I find It amzing how to young girls who both were bullied but now one is a bully, tell eachother everything and then turn around and make eachothers lives better by calling the police and telling the other girls mom about her 2nd husbend cheating on her.

it was a very sad, real story, but there are a few typos that need correcting. i think you should add on.

Wow, great story! your expressions were vivid and how i wish i could write like you! :)

Why 'Alice' my dear, you are such a great writer :))) 333

this is great, really. im so glad i get to write a story with you. you have such great talent, and im so jealous of it.

Great job. :]]] 3