great beginning :)

Any chance for Sanji & Pudding?

chapter I loved to last part when Nami helped out Luffy get dressed a little. The hug was great I loved it. Can't wait to read the rest!

There's a "k" in the "new".

Where the hell is Luffy?!

ZOLU ZOLU ZOLU! WRITE A ZOLU FANFIC!

Come on it time to end it plz update I want more LuNa and RoZo moments

Make it brotherly love atleast he lives robin no gayness in zoro him n robin luffy n nami

Hehe, I think that was sweet with the whole Luffy and Zoro thing in a way that those two have been together since the begging and are like brothers. As for the development, I think it's interesting but just try not to inflict to much pain and suffering. A saving grace should at least be that Chopper can sedate them because I know how it feels to be in excruciating pain and going into shock so it only feels right for them to survive and at least patched up and given a pain killer. If not fine, I mean it is the "real" world and bad stuff happens but they got an expert doctor and a variety of medical supplies for Pete's sake. Now I feel like I'm in pain, anyway keep doing what you're doing! :)

WHAT just happened? _

I known you've been hinting a LuffyxZoro pairing but since this was a LuNa and ZoRo story I never thought it would happen. I don't have anything against yaoi pairings, everyone has a right to ship who they like, I just don't plan on ever reading them. So I hope that's as far as you'll go with the Bromance stuff...

I'll be honest with you, the romance felt fast pace and awkward so as the characters, they were OOC most of the time especially Zoro in this chapter. I could imagine heartfelt scenes between the two but not like this... However, you have a good writing style and the plot of your story have improved since first chapter.

Also, even though I did say that most of the time your characters were OOC, there were times I could feel their personality in the anime appear in your writing. Kudos to that! :D

I hope you don't take this as a flame because that was not my intention, like I have stated you have a good writing style and I could read the potential in your story so I'm saying this stuff to help you, please don't take offense :)

As for the chapter, Usopp was great in this chapter and I felt really touch when Nami tried her best for "Him", so sweet XD

wha... ?

Woah! Where did the Zoro/Luffy thing come from? Talk about out from left field. I didnt know this was gonna turn into a Zoro/Luffy twist.

great story!please update soon!

Short, but good. One question, though: Zoro loves Luffy, as in a brother or father love, or as IN love with Luffy as a lover? 'Cause that would kinda defeat the purpose of LuNa and ZoRo, which you set for the story since the beginning.

Update soon!

Great Great Great! Love your story...Please write more!