I loved it. My favourite fa fix ever. And also, it's the original twoips, so that makes it even better. And they haven't given away arbok and wheezing yet. Best story ever.

Simplesmente maravilhosa sua história amo este casal e sua história foi escrita maravilhosamente bem espero poder ler mais história como está vc está de parabéns

This story was so funny! Meowth is more cunning than we give him credit for!

Loved it :)

Wow, nice! You've got a knack for this romance stuff, unlike me. Believe me, I've tried... Great job!

Smiled all the way through, really love your writing.

this was good.
honestly, I think you made them a bit too ooc (I sorta doubt meowth would make that many wise cracks about them hooking up, and I think jessie was a little too mean) but I think this was a creative idea and i enjoyed it. also your wriitng style is good. Keep writiing:)

There's so many awesome things with this story but my favourite without a doubt was the kisses - the desire, the confusion, the anger, the fear, the realisations... it was all written so perfectly. There's so many 'admit their feelings / first kiss' fics where they finally kiss (and I cheer :D ) but this totally different take on it is so refreshing, and was so detailed and in-character, especially Jessie's reaction. Brilliant!

Thank you ! I enjoyed reading this fanfic !

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!

First of all, congrats for keeping everybody so in character; jessie and james, the twerps, but most of all Meowth! I just loved how well written his character is in this! You did a great job not only with his accent, also with his clever, mischievous personality! I just can perfectly see the real Meowth acting like this, having the same reactions, and it's the funniest thing ever. It was really amusing the whole "Jessie/James is in love with someone, but it's a secret... alright, I'll tell ya" lol brilliant.
And as for the rocketshipping, great aswell. I've read some fics where Meowth helps them get together, but mostly because one of them (usually James) is already in love with the other and stuff. I really enjoyed that in this fanfic neither Jessie or James were initially in love, but later they find this attraction and feelings between them. And I loved the part when James goes to apologise and the butter-would-melt smile and the whole bashing Cassidy part (hilarious!) and well of course the kissing and the ending, with Meowth purring between them aww! haha.
Favourited!

Best longest one-shot ever! I love love love how you have everyone in character. It just amazes me. It's like straight out from the anime. You write a perfect Meowth too. 3 And The kissing scene.. oh my gosh, I found that so romantic and sexy at the same time. It made me melt. I actually read this story earlier around 3 in the morning and I even told myself I'll finish it later on but I couldn't stop reading it. lol.

As always, very very good job! Looking forward to more KojiMusa stories from you. :)

Wonderful! Superb! I'm without words!
This is seriously one of the best fanfics EVER! In the entire history of universe!
And it was so in-character, so believable... awwww, I'll just have to read it all over again, it's truly great! :D

This was the cutest thing! You write these two so well!
Nice Meowth voice too!

Now, I've been reading several of your stories and this one I am going to review. I loved it, absolutely. You captured them all brilliantly, captured Meowth very well indeed :P

Please, do keep writing, as this is a masterpiece.

Ohhh, Meowth is a sly one. I loved how Jessie and James both had the same reactions to everything, it just illustrated how perfect they are for each other. This fic made me chuckle to myself several times. There was also a nice bit of foreshadowing going on between Misty and Brock and a lot of contrasting imagery throughout, which I liked.

Overall, I loved this :)