:D brilliant

I absolutely love the RA series, but I always thought that Will recovered just a little bit to quickly from all of the trauma he faced in Skandia. I have read a few fanfics that try to fill that gap, but I honestly think that this is the best one. It is very realistic and you portrayed that characters very and you stayed as close to canon as possible. Awesome job!

This is a damn good story! I know RA is a children's book, but they definitely could have touched more on the trauma Will would have suffered after skandia. You did a great job portraying all of the characters, and I really enjoyed reading it :) thanks for sharing your work!

That was wonderfully heart wrenching. I've read it before, but I'm not sure if I've reviewed or not, so here you go.

That was outstanding and I thank you for writing this.

Wow...

Beautiful. :)
poor Will

Aww... That's just so sad! Thank goodness for Halt though! Incredible writing!

Awwwwww poor will. Beautiful... i'm just glad you didn't make it so will got raped... your a good writer cause some writers tend to go with stuff that would scar a person for life... well this would too but ya know its not to much

That was really great!

IM CRYING SO HARD NOW! So sad! Yet so beautiful... Poor Will... You fine person, did an excellent job on the story.

PERFECT!This is EXACTLYwhat i was looking for...thank you sooooooooooo much!

That was one of the best fanfics for any fandom I have ever read. Probably the best in the RA fandom.

omg this is amazing!1 i love this story, its just, ahh i don't have words to describe how much i love this story!1

Wow. Great job! Poor will! I liked how u put the relationship between halt and will.

OH MY GOSH! SO SWEET YET TERRIBLE! I love the third book, it's my favorite (guilty add mission? It's cuz of the will whump as a slave:P) this expands on that so well! I always thought that will got off a little light for that knife move...this was perfect!:D