Reviews for Unexpected Love |
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![]() ![]() Please update?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! 3 |
![]() ![]() Hey, your stories have good setting and all but you need to edit it more. I suggest that you can do less '...' And more other stuff like comas and periods. Keep it going |
![]() ![]() whens chapter 5 of unexpected love coming back |
![]() ![]() when is chapter 5 of unexpected love coming |
![]() ![]() hey on expected love the alpha leader that raped sara make a 1 that got her preagnet when he comes in the den she and him have sex then after that she serprises him by saying shes preagnet after the he freaks out but sara asks him to be her mate and he ses yes okay. |
![]() ![]() hey i read the unexpected love hey right a lemon about this story about that story with sara and the alpha leader and make her like it more then chapter 4 of unexpected love right a story about them and make it a rape story where shes still in the den okay.P.S i don't have a account |
![]() ![]() Hey i like your stories but i mostly like unexpected love put a message if your still writing please i want to know i don,t have an accont so put message to readers please im a big fan |
![]() ![]() You should make a part 2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wtf |
![]() ![]() ''love'' the ending if u know what im talking about :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story man |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey man good story you got going hear can't wait for the next chapter man : D |
![]() ![]() Update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() And then when they got to the river, the... uh... river monster of... the city of... Left Newb... came out of the very narrow river-I mean if you lived in a super cramped space for most of your life, wouldn't you be cranky too?-and it said, "Give me a cheeseburger!" Then you're all, like, "I think you're thinking of the American diabetics." or something like that. |