I couldn't stop laughing! My innards were hurting as I proceed towards the next chapter. I knew what I would get myself into considering this is Dissidia (Final Fantasy Universe crossover; should expect anything!)
And the worst part? Is that I can hear their voices LOUD and CLEAR. Hahahaha! You were able to connect your story to the game itself and there's just so much going on that it's hilarious!

I'm still laughing and I really hope to read more of these from you. Thank you so much for this! This was spot on Fan-tucking-tactics! Errr, I mean, -Tastic! XD

Dude, this is fabulous. I read it from beginning to end in a 2 hour sitting that ate away my weekend because it was too damn good to put down! I realize this was about 6 years ago but ever though about doing Duodecim? I bet there are some hilarious misunderstandings that can be exploited between Firion and Lightning, not to mention the whole Kain betrayal XD

Also! Where did you get all you final fantasy info from? It's well woven in if you haven't played all the games!

This one made me crack up so badly, just the mental image of Firion jumping when Tidus yells ... :D

she has the jackpot of harems

This is so funny :D! Can I translate this to a Chinese Final Fantasy Forum for more people to enjoy it?

I realize that this is a couple of years old, but it has made my morning better. Thank you.

I was trying to make it the entire way through and the comment at the end, but I just had to comment on this chapter because it literally made me laugh out loud! Oh, the Emperor, what a card. You are portraying the characters all so funny, yet seemingly in character. Excellent job!

"Your son is kind of a fruitcake" is my absolute favourite line in this whole thing. No contest.

Ahaha poor Kuja! I'm sure his ego took a huge blow while being forced to type that.

That is...harsh.

I never noticed the similarities...until now.

I demand a Duodecim sequel! I wanna know about the crap Lightning's grpup got up to!

I love this story. I love all the little ways you make fun of the characters. The story itself is quite ingenius. Great job!

OH MY GOD COSMOS
REALLY NOW?

This story was such a great read I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved it! 3 AWESOME JOB!

Aw oh my gosh these are sweet.
Even Cloud's, because all they want to do is go HOME and oh my gosh okay surprise feelz