Reviews for Fraterculus
Scarecrow94 chapter 1 . 6/18
Thanks
Jostanos chapter 35 . 6/11
Patience is a virtue that we all lack, lass. Harry was hoping to see you in his room at Hogwarts, Daphne, but you had already left thinking that he had either forgotten about you, or that he had perished during his "mission". *shrugs* Am I wrong with my guess? GASP! I _AM_?! How so?
Please.. do tell. :)

*ahem* Anyway.. you aren't the only one that has to deal with.. well.. stuff.

Harry and his family do too in more ways than you can imagine.
levicxrpus chapter 6 . 6/1
I LOVE this so far! I love how it’s not over exaggerating everything and lily and James are sensible. I also love how Harry is not made out to be the next Merlin and his brother shows more power than him and he accepts it! GREAT READ! I raise my wand to you /*
readme-silly chapter 1 . 5/23
Wait, so Dumbledore gave them a free pensieve?
The Mexican Taco Overlord chapter 35 . 5/22
Holy shit man, you hit me with the feels with the death of Remus, how it affects James and Harry, and now Daphne's. I'm not crying man, you're...
pygmalyon chapter 35 . 5/22
It took me two days to read this story and I wish that I could go back in time and do it all over again. The pace of the story is great especially compared to other fanfics, which usually after some interesting plot twist go into stagnation. The characters are very real and very humane. All in all you have huge talent so please keep going! This website needs people like you!
Sujeeth chapter 28 . 5/19
Well, its a really good story but im going to have to stop it here since i was losing interest and i read that Harry and Daphne face issues on the upcoming chapters and i really dont want to read more.. ill be happy to stop here. Good read though:)
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 9 . 5/16
Stupid Harry. Vengeance is best served cold. He should have gotten well first from his injury from the accromantulas.
Hank1967 chapter 35 . 5/15
Such sadness... I hope Harry and Daphne are going to be able to reach out to each other. Otherwise this is going to be painful. Excellent chapter!
Hank1967 chapter 33 . 5/15
Wow - that was a rough chapter! Great job pulling it all together. Now I understand what all of Harry's dreams are about. He's being told not to try and match Voldemort. Very interesting... Bummer that Daphne is drifting away from him, too. And now he's had to kill Remus. That can't be an easy burden to bear. I'm sure Peter either purposefully or was Imperioused to do something to Lupin's Wolfsbane potion. Poor guy. Danny is going to be heartbroken and Harry's going to develop a guilt complex. Looking forward to seeing how you resolve all of this!
Hank1967 chapter 32 . 5/15
Interesting take on the Chamber of Secrets. Loved all of Gred and Forge's running commentary. Also glad to see everyone make it out safely. Now if only Daphne will forgive Harry... Otherwise there is no "meet the parents" scene and I want to see that! Great job!
Hank1967 chapter 31 . 5/15
Excellent chapter! Love Moody's negotiating skills. He really should teach a class in that! Interesting this twist on Chamber of Secrets... I like what you've done here. It's very original. I'm actually shocked (not mad) that you killed off Draco. And Gilderoy, too, for that matter. I'm actually sad to see this Gilderoy dead. He was just getting interesting. I was glad to see Peter assisting with the map, but I'm still worried about him. His story is just too strange... I'm also sad to see the map gone. She was too much fun! Also glad to see that the Potters managed to worm their way out of that trap! Great job! Looking forward to seeing Daphne meet the parents!
Hank1967 chapter 30 . 5/14
Interesting chapter! I'm still trying to get over a relatively competent Lockhart (maybe or maybe not?)... Never seen it before in fanfic. Well, maybe once, but that story is sort of an exception to everything; more comedic. Not that this one isn't funny, but it takes a more serious tack toward the basilisk. Enjoy seeing how the dynamic between Harry and Daphne is changing as they trust each other more. She's definitely a handful, but I think your Harry is enjoying it. I like your take on Daphne - it's quite unique. Yes, she's an ice queen, but she's much, much more than that. I think you've done a great job with her backstory, too.
Hank1967 chapter 29 . 5/14
Excellent chapter! Loved the Harry/Daphne banter. Their dynamic is hilarious! Great job with that! Methinks Dumbledore is making a mistake trusting Gilderoy and removing Harry's Prefect badge. Poor Harry - all the adults are screwing everything up and he's going to be the only one left standing to clean it all up...
Hank1967 chapter 28 . 5/14
Excellent chapter! Why do I get a really bad, BAD feeling about Wormtail? I think Sirius and Harry are right to suspect him. Everything about him stinks. Great job! Can't wait to see what's next!
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