I really liked this FF but I don't like the ending becouse it's so sad and unlike the games they probably will never meet again. Why can't she just travel back and forth between both worlds? I want a sequel where rio and elisa meet again.

Wait why doesn't rick have a phone (or similar)? Why did they only comunicate prr letter instead of using phones/internet? Why did ni one try to call rick (if he does have some kins of mobile phone)?

"A Russian accent spoke behind them. They turnedbto see the Jynx. . ." immediately upon reading that phrase I am hearing her speak in Zarya's voice

I would love to see a sequel of this story with the same characters. It's honestly one of the best reads so far.

Ah, I remember going against the legendary dogs for this game and getting annoyed with the 30 floors... not to mention the amount of times I’ve gone to the north wind dungeon trying to recruit suicune and he never. Joined. Nice to finally see some canon areas in this fanfic, thought I was gonna go crazy from all the non canon areas... though it’s an interesting concept

*the*

I hope tge jynx is named Niki Manaj

I'm 30 years old... Why am I shedding tears over this...
Damn it

Alright, done! That was great… though, I can't help but feel a little unsatisfied by the ending. I feel like there ought to have been more story and interaction between Kale and the girl as a human. Would have been interesting. Oh well, on to the next story! :D

Somehow, I figured who the Riolu was the entire time. Great story though, like everything else you write. The pacing is good, grammar is solid, and the characters feel real.

This was such an amazing story :)

... I can't believe I'm this clueless! For a second there I thought the riolu she neglected was rio! And then when you mentioned kale my mind suddenly blanked on who the hell is kale and then I remembered he is rio's dad! Man that is some kind of plot twist!

Though I think it'll be kind of romantic if it was really rio in the first place. Like elisa waited for rio while rio chased her that kind of soapy stuff. But I really like this ending quite well. Well I know there's a sequel to this and I'll read it some time in the future since it's about alex and eve. But is there a possibility of a true sequel to this! Like what truly inspired in elisa's journey as a trainer, what's her pokemon like? How did she win in gym battles? Or did she take the elite four or the pokemon league? Stuff like that. I'm curious what kind of universe elisa is in. Is it the gameverse? Animeverse? Or the mangaverse.

Then after that a trilogy of elisa returning once again with kale! It could be elisa as a pokemon or a human but not alone she's with her team of pokemon with kale! Since she's basically grown up and done achievement in her world she could just basically settle down in rio's universe. STUFF LIKE THAT! I want a sequel to this :'( though it's your choice.

Well anyway this is quite an enjoyable ride! 'Sigh' there is still some loose ends to this but I guess you'll just leave this to the reader's imagination right? Though it'll be awesome if you write something like this again.

Wow i find myself favoriting and following a story that i already finished heh hope thaere will be a related story. loved this one too.

Cool great job.

Ha, this story amused me greatly. I couldn't finish the prologue though, due to two indicators:
"She had always considered herself mildly pretty." That is an unfortunate sentence. I feel like most women could be described as "mildly pretty", so your description of the character doesn't add anything. It's also awkward, to me.
More importantly, the first sentence of your entire story, the VERY FIRST sentence, has a typo. The first sentence is arguably the most important sentence an author must right. The first sentence must hook the reader. The first sentence must be powerful. But your first sentence is incredibly bland, simple in structure, and worst of all, had a word that is misspelled.
I'm not sure there is anything a story can do to turn me off more than have a first sentence with a word spelled wrong. I agonized for at least half an hour over how to word my first sentence, for my first pokemon fanfic. So I know that this story just isn't worth it to me, to read. Good luck in future endeavors.