| Reviews for A Debt |
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kanjichibi chapter 1 . 4/21 A really good start for the story. |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/30/2018 How high were you when you wrote this chapter? |
justalittlequietplease chapter 10 . 4/11/2018 Any chance this will get finished? It's really good, and would love to see it brought home. Phoenix80803 |
proton104 chapter 10 . 5/18/2017 Any plans on continuing the story? |
automaton14 chapter 10 . 1/20/2017 You need to proofread your stuff. Everything is very stiff, not fluid or natural sounding at all. |
Xyoras chapter 7 . 8/19/2016 I hope for Harry's sake that he doesn't go to sleep in her room, or this could look bad. |
Artemis the Great chapter 2 . 2/1/2016 wouldn't the debt be for fleur sister |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2015 Quick typo fix "but since when they were normal." When were they normal makes more sense(or at least I am pretty sure it is) pretty good start otherwise |
Dorben chapter 2 . 10/16/2014 Like a son is a bit much. AND ALL DEM AD-JEC-TIVES |
Dorben chapter 1 . 10/16/2014 Baby blue? Forest green? Tomato red? Well, well, well... Look who likes her adjectives. |
Salunatic chapter 8 . 7/26/2014 I swear, this is hilarious. Especially the chicken and egg thing with Cho. Well done! -Salunatic |
Over 9000 chapter 10 . 6/20/2014 Its a shame that he never continued the story. I reckon that fleur and harry should eventually marry |
CoreWorld chapter 3 . 3/3/2014 GREAT! Please do some more Gabrielle, nothing non-inocent. |
musicfan1346 chapter 10 . 2/14/2014 Thank you for the laugh. Please continue! |
continental-line chapter 1 . 2/9/2014 A nice story, I can see how this was written as an one-shot. I hope the fpllowing chapters are up to the standered you set. |