Reviews for A Debt
kanjichibi chapter 1 . 4/21
A really good start for the story.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/30/2018
How high were you when you wrote this chapter?
justalittlequietplease chapter 10 . 4/11/2018
Any chance this will get finished? It's really good, and would love to see it brought home.

Phoenix80803
proton104 chapter 10 . 5/18/2017
Any plans on continuing the story?
automaton14 chapter 10 . 1/20/2017
You need to proofread your stuff. Everything is very stiff, not fluid or natural sounding at all.
Xyoras chapter 7 . 8/19/2016
I hope for Harry's sake that he doesn't go to sleep in her room, or this could look bad.
Artemis the Great chapter 2 . 2/1/2016
wouldn't the debt be for fleur sister
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
Quick typo fix "but since when they were normal." When were they normal makes more sense(or at least I am pretty sure it is) pretty good start otherwise
Dorben chapter 2 . 10/16/2014
Like a son is a bit much.

AND ALL DEM AD-JEC-TIVES
Dorben chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Baby blue? Forest green? Tomato red?

Well, well, well...

Look who likes her adjectives.
Salunatic chapter 8 . 7/26/2014
I swear, this is hilarious. Especially the chicken and egg thing with Cho. Well done!

-Salunatic
Over 9000 chapter 10 . 6/20/2014
Its a shame that he never continued the story. I reckon that fleur and harry should eventually marry
CoreWorld chapter 3 . 3/3/2014
GREAT! Please do some more Gabrielle, nothing non-inocent.
musicfan1346 chapter 10 . 2/14/2014
Thank you for the laugh. Please continue!
continental-line chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
A nice story, I can see how this was written as an one-shot. I hope the fpllowing chapters are up to the standered you set.
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