| Reviews for Divided We Stand |
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Reviewer chapter 6 . 8/8/2015 OMG this is so good! I know I'm late but plz continue this. I love the characterization of Erza and Jellal/Mystogan and your writing style. |
Kitty chapter 3 . 8/16/2014 Wait... I just realized something! If King Faust is Mystogan's father , then doesn't it mean that Makrov is Jellal's father? BTW Mystogan is Edo Jellal and King Faust is Edo Makrov but I assume you know that already. Great story and looking forward to next updates! Ship Mystwalker even though they like totally dislike each other an this ain't a romance story... Byee |
amnaK96 chapter 6 . 6/17/2014 oh man where's the next chapter for Divided-we-stand?! it's too good to just leave it at that! your writing skills are profound, as i have commented before and i keep on doing so because you keep on impressing me further! i am in awe as to how you adapt their style from the manga, and also use such lexical term to make it appropriate and suitable for the situation and time era! it's amazing, i've noticed you've left the writing for a long time now and it's just a shame... T_T please please do continue writing because we don't have that many good fanfiction writers out there, you are one of the best i've seen, and i've already read almost all Jerza fics there are out there! please continue with at least this fic and post real soon, i'll be rooting and supporting you all the way! you clearly have an Author's drive and i just know you have a bright and successful career ahead of you if you were to pursue it! _ 3 |
firearrow13 chapter 6 . 2/18/2014 Great, please upload again, I can't wait to read more! :) |
Pusha chapter 6 . 10/23/2013 This is an amazing story :) Update please :3 |
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 6 . 9/28/2013 great fic so far. hope it will be continued. |
Jerza Fernandes chapter 6 . 2/15/2013 Interesting plot. The chemistry between Erza and Jellal is definitely there. I know they will get along just well although I think you are making Mystogan a lot weaker than he is. Even without magic staffs I'm sure he is still very experienced in hand to hand combat! Update soon! It's been a while! |
accidentalfan chapter 5 . 3/18/2012 awesooome I really like angry Erza :D |
zatanga chapter 6 . 3/8/2012 this story is awesome ! will Jellal and Erza finish together ? After all this hate ? hope to read a next update soon ) |
fairytailfan chapter 4 . 1/26/2012 Yep! Erza is definitely comparable to a queen. And the talk between Faust and Jellal was really good. I really loved this chapter. :D ..Hope you update soon. |
Yuki Kusanagi chapter 6 . 12/4/2011 I like your idea with materia :P At first, when read your description about the cave, I think about the mako caves too. Your plot getting interestin :) Keep updates |
Beta5200 chapter 6 . 12/2/2011 Oooo~ This sounds interesting~! |
Areli MB chapter 6 . 11/30/2011 :O Esto es muy interesante ;) y ya queiro saber como sera la evaluación de Erza o.o que miedo :o |
p y r otechnic - - ROYAL chapter 6 . 11/30/2011 Have I mentioned how much I love this fic? Really, it makes my day every time I get the e-mail telling me there's a new chapter. Short chapter, yes, but ohai plot! I love the appearence of the Phantom Lord peeps, it was a nice touch. Also, I adore how you write the Jellal/Faust scenes. I was never much of a fan of Faust, but I like the way you write him. M rating~? Oooh, sounds fun~ 3 My inner perv is excite. xDDDD As always, looking forward to the next chapter! |
Burned Down chapter 6 . 11/30/2011 Woaaahah, I guess that was like an intro to the main plot :D Anyway, I loved how Jellal was all beaten up xD And he will be worse later o.O And Faust made me laugh with his comments xDDD Like you said, short but important. I hope next chap will be as good as this one...and I hope we'll have Jellal beaten up again e_e |