Reviews for SlytherGrin
Hedwig chapter 52 . 7/31/2013
Ok so I love the ending but I wish you would write a sequel I will check your account.
Hedwig chapter 50 . 7/31/2013
Is it Sunday ?
Hedwig chapter 31 . 7/31/2013
Miss January
Wow clever
Hedwig chapter 18 . 7/31/2013
Draco is irritating me, oh well I still love the story it's just one of those moments I want to know some sense into him

I love the name Allegra and her personality

Does she have allergies? Ok sry had to point out Allegra is a type of allergy medicine :)
fabfourhipster chapter 52 . 7/29/2012
I love this story i hope you write more!
Tobi Ilian chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
I like the fanfic so far. It has great grammar, so that is a big plus. Good detail and great introduction. Keep up the good work!
TaiyouChan chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Well, I think the writing is fairly good so far, and for the most part it seems your spelling and grammar is good too.

My only concern really is Whimsy and Allegra. I feel like they both could very easily become Mary Sues if you're not careful.

At the moment they seem fine, though I must point out their names actually point them in the direction of a Sue. I guess I personally find the names a bit weird, but hey, they are your characters.

I like how they almost contradict each other, it seems really cool that too totally different people are that close of friends.

Anyway, I'll probably take a long time with other chapters, but I'll get to them eventually.

~TaiyouChan of Critics United
Jessica12357 chapter 36 . 11/23/2011
This is going to be good...

Loved what I have read so far. Glad to have some more Potter knowledge
Jessica12357 chapter 34 . 11/23/2011
SHAME SHAME, Draco. Sorry, I'm dramatic. XD

I love this story! I know I've said it so many times but I do
Jessica12357 chapter 31 . 11/23/2011
I didn't know that Whimsy was French until now. That's awesome! It makes me happy that her surname is Janvier because that's my birth month in French (unless it's Envier)
Jessica12357 chapter 25 . 11/23/2011
SHINY PUDDING! Loved that line XD

I'm glad they're together again. They're really a wreck without each other, and I loved how Draco owned Pansy at dinner
Jessica12357 chapter 24 . 11/23/2011
FINALLY! Draco has had some sense knocked into him. Sorry I didn't review for the last few chapters, again for fear of repitition.
Jessica12357 chapter 19 . 11/23/2011
Exploding peanut brittle. Sounds like Fanboy and Chum Chum XD

I didn't review the last chapter because my reviews seem pretty monotonous now that I think of them, so I wanted to spare you the boredom of repeatedly telling you how much I love your chapters.
Jessica12357 chapter 17 . 11/23/2011
Your stories are always so romantic and delightful, you know that?
Jessica12357 chapter 16 . 11/23/2011
Love the romance 3 Can't say much else
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