| Reviews for SlytherGrin |
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Hedwig chapter 52 . 7/31/2013 Ok so I love the ending but I wish you would write a sequel I will check your account. |
Hedwig chapter 50 . 7/31/2013 Is it Sunday ? |
Hedwig chapter 31 . 7/31/2013 Miss January Wow clever |
Hedwig chapter 18 . 7/31/2013 Draco is irritating me, oh well I still love the story it's just one of those moments I want to know some sense into him I love the name Allegra and her personality Does she have allergies? Ok sry had to point out Allegra is a type of allergy medicine :) |
fabfourhipster chapter 52 . 7/29/2012 I love this story i hope you write more! |
Tobi Ilian chapter 1 . 1/4/2012 I like the fanfic so far. It has great grammar, so that is a big plus. Good detail and great introduction. Keep up the good work! |
TaiyouChan chapter 1 . 1/1/2012 Well, I think the writing is fairly good so far, and for the most part it seems your spelling and grammar is good too. My only concern really is Whimsy and Allegra. I feel like they both could very easily become Mary Sues if you're not careful. At the moment they seem fine, though I must point out their names actually point them in the direction of a Sue. I guess I personally find the names a bit weird, but hey, they are your characters. I like how they almost contradict each other, it seems really cool that too totally different people are that close of friends. Anyway, I'll probably take a long time with other chapters, but I'll get to them eventually. ~TaiyouChan of Critics United |
Jessica12357 chapter 36 . 11/23/2011 This is going to be good... Loved what I have read so far. Glad to have some more Potter knowledge |
Jessica12357 chapter 34 . 11/23/2011 SHAME SHAME, Draco. Sorry, I'm dramatic. XD I love this story! I know I've said it so many times but I do |
Jessica12357 chapter 31 . 11/23/2011 I didn't know that Whimsy was French until now. That's awesome! It makes me happy that her surname is Janvier because that's my birth month in French (unless it's Envier) |
Jessica12357 chapter 25 . 11/23/2011 SHINY PUDDING! Loved that line XD I'm glad they're together again. They're really a wreck without each other, and I loved how Draco owned Pansy at dinner |
Jessica12357 chapter 24 . 11/23/2011 FINALLY! Draco has had some sense knocked into him. Sorry I didn't review for the last few chapters, again for fear of repitition. |
Jessica12357 chapter 19 . 11/23/2011 Exploding peanut brittle. Sounds like Fanboy and Chum Chum XD I didn't review the last chapter because my reviews seem pretty monotonous now that I think of them, so I wanted to spare you the boredom of repeatedly telling you how much I love your chapters. |
Jessica12357 chapter 17 . 11/23/2011 Your stories are always so romantic and delightful, you know that? |
Jessica12357 chapter 16 . 11/23/2011 Love the romance 3 Can't say much else |