u liar

WHERE THE FUCKING aT

HAHAHAHA! Wow, I think this story is pretty awesome! It's been one fun ride!

I just noticed this, chapter 20 is not there. I think ya skipped number 20 there.
I'mma be leaving my actual review up as soon as I'm done readin the story though!

Okay, witchcraft to stepping over the line, I'm out bye.

Why did you use the F word, like couldn't you have replaced it or something?
*Sigh* and I hoped I had found a story WITHOUT that word...
Nvm hopes officially crashed.

At least the cussing isn't major-
AND HOLY COWS THAT MADE ME BLUSH *screes.*
Well, good thing is ya did it right and it was, not fully explained, unlike SOME writers these days, so thanks for that.

I still blushed a lot though O.O
Oof.

I forgot that this is like rated M later.
But Idc, hopefully whatever happens will be accurate-

OM THIS.
Teach me yer skills u

She dosen't seem Mary Sue to me, her personality and reactions are pretty realistic.
From one Author to another anyway.
And I love this so far!
First story about Jake and an Oc with no cussing X3

Kyle Cosner - This story was first published back in 2011. I helped write this story myself, gave input and even Beta read it. The person on Wattpad blatantly copied this work and only changed names and slightly changed species. They purposefully coped this work, stole it, and are claiming it is their own.

I read part of this story because it was a good one and realized it’s a god damn replica of “Ill be dammed” on Wattpad, so who stole from who

This story is a guilty pleasure of mine.

I love this story it's my favourite. Please don't delete it. Look forward to reading the rewritten version.

This is good. I hope she gets pregnant I want to read what Jake would say if that would happen