I'm pretty sure you've given up on this fic and your others, but if you ever do come back I would love to see another chapter to this story. You're really good at writing and this has an entertaining plot.

I usually don't enjoy supernatural elements with my fan-fics, and generally skip them. But yours is very well written and handles the subject matter in a "beliveable" sense. Beliveable in quotes because of the sci-fi angle. I am a huge fan of the Kirino x Kyousuke romance as well. You've stayed pretty close to the characters as well. Please post more of these whenever you can as I am following this story, thanks.

Please please update this story it's so good and I really miss not reading it. This and your first oreimo fix are by far the best I've read on this page. I know muses can be a bitch but if she ever comes back to you please consider updating

Please continue this story. I think it's very original.

so the one that want's the soul is the real one, and Kiriono is now complete with both parts... with the memories of what is going on... and does this ability rewrite Kyousuke's real world or is this a false world that Kyousuke is in...?

what's the pair? Kyousuke X Kirino?

I like this. I really like this. Even the 2nd chapter made me cry! T-T

I quite enjoyed this, and it is quite a shame that it hasn't been updated in quite a while. The concept you have is quite original, and I would love to see more of it. It's also written rather well, flowing rather naturally, and Kirino/Riko moments were they gush of Kyousuke are quite nice.

Speaking out of personal preference, I'd like to see a harem universe please. Perhaps as a 'sorry I deleted your sister' apology gift. No tsun, all dere. At least it might be funny.

-Sincerely SAmaster01

oh common you cant leave it here, im dying to know what happens next, but by the look of it this was last updated in 2011 an right now its mid 2012 so i dont think there will be anymore ;(

amazing...

i must say this was absolutely amazing. i was entertained from the beginning to end and could really feel how he felt.
one of my favorite part had to be when he was able to read minds i was like wahooo you got the power to not fuck up anymore.
my second favorite part was the ending as it was so emotional it made me really sad and i almost cried.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :) YOUR AMAZING

I honestly don't consider this fic to be crap, the whole thing has been rather interesting! I am looking forward to reading the continuation, and seeing how you are going to bring Kyousuke and Kirino together, and whether it will, in the end turn out to be a shared dream, that actually brings them together in "their real life" as it were! Anyways, good job on this fic, and I am hoping to read more when you get to it! hopefully your muse hasn't left totally, or is simply on hiatus to Maui for some sand sun and surf!

Well written, but really confusing.

Great story!

I am enjoying it very much so far :) I notice that Riko seem to be developing her own personality gradually. She looks to be becoming more and more a true twin sister of Kirino. I like that. I think she will gain her own soul, if not already.

I bet that Kyoko is not as much of a shadow as Koji thinks she is. I hope that she will knock sense into Koji. Speaking of Koji, I wonder if Dark Koji is result of his pain and suffering (which Kyoko mentioned when saying Kyou learning the pain the hard way, same as Koji had) split away from the real Koji.

Looking forward for another update!

ooo i like pls update asap xxx tigs

I hope you write more.