Wonderful!

Just read this today and it was amazing

Hello again!
We have just finished this story, but my sister is off adventuring for the next week so it will be some time before we move on to brothers keeper.
Comments from my sister:
My favourite was the reference at the end to the beginning with the Thor action figure its really funny. I really like your stories, I find them really funny with lots of action. P.S. I think my sister won't be able to talk for three years after reading all these stories to me !

Merlin! You used Merlin from 'Merlin'! (even if it isn't even that Merlin)
*bows to your power*

This certainly felt like the perfect conclusion for this storyline; I am partially satisfied, but still looking forward to the next installment :)

Also...Thor and Iron Man action figures!

Dragon! Yeah! Pity Loki was too drained to make it a Dragon vs. Dragon fight xD
Coulson! I love Coulson, he is so hilarious! Dead-pan characters can say the funniest things :)

Oh! I bet it's Arthur! (or maybe Merlin, but I think Arthur)

Oh...brotherly feels...I love Thor/Loki brotherly feels!
This was a great chance for these two to really get a chance to sit down and hash things out. I mean, middle of a crisis and all, but hey, they are possibly in a place of great time-warp! Plus, Thor had to heal...boy am I glad Loki was able to do that healing spell...

Ooh. More cliffhanger!

And ohmygods! Sewing Loki's lips shut! That was *shakes head in horror/admiration*
I kind of want the others to find out, and go crazypants on Mordred.

Cliffhangers! Such a love/hate relationship there never existed but for this one between writers and readers!

And the Captain is back!
xD I think I'd be worried if Fury started joking around me! Maybe it was just the sword talking though :)

*breathless from laughter* I'm sorry, but that line from Loki about Fury and nightmares -
" - although it crossed Loki's mind to wonder whether he ever found it tiring, to be a main feature in the nightmares of others."

Also...I'm really nervous and hopeful that Loki will be able to handle and return Excalibur. I mean, my personal version of Loki would of course end up prevailing...and I think this version of Loki will as well, though he may find some struggles along the way.

And Loki going all Lady of the Lake there at the end was the best way you could've ended this chapter!

Current favorite chapter for this story!
So many good parts to it; mentions of 'Merlin' (freaking awesome show! ...why does BBC make all the greats? *thoughtful*), Thor and Loki being brotherly, talk about folklore revolving around Merlin, Arthur, Mordred (thank you, 'Merlin', for informing me as to who that even is)...and of course, the at times almost crackish undertones that I've noticed here and there throughout both stories that I absolutely adore.

*gulp* Never explore without backup! I almost had a heart attack thinking Loki was going to get snatched!
But, good clue is good clue.
That little snippet story was fun to read; and also softened me towards this version of Odin more than I had been :)

I actually do love recap and chatty chapters xD
So, I can get the bit of mistrust (and I'm glad Annie is there to help Loki!), but I'm just hoping it doesn't turn into another big snarled mess like it has the potential to.

Oooh. What an interesting plot-twist! Looking forward to more *rubs hands gleefully*
Again, thank you for writing such an entertaining and enjoyable story!

I can't even tell you how much this story pleases me.
Thank you so much for creating this verse and writing these stories!