I don't understand why people keep expecting all characters created to be bad ass, hot yet relatable, unique, Intelligent, powerful. Doesn't it get boring when a character is so perfect there is no moving forward, no evolving. I like this story very much, and as I see it, when she was treated with a modicum of humanity she preferred to take that little thread of light and roll with it because there is no way she would have survived. Maybe it is Stockholm syndrome, it doesn't negate her survival.
I really hope you update this story, changes made or not.

hey I LOVE YOUR STORYYYY:)))), one of the best Naruto fanfics I read before! When will you update the next chapter? (hope really soon)

Y would u stop?
It's been 4 years already ;(

hi how you doing? loved the update! hope to read you again soon

I’m still waiting for an update /Iy1lMICwr2U

I thought I was gonna like her and I actually symphatized with her at first but she's too spoiled. If I were Yamato, I would've dumped her back wherever she came from.

She also displays a severe lack of survival instincts.

I guess you're really going with the dumb, big-boobed damsel-in-distress trope?

Also "circus entertainers" lol. I'm out.

Is she gonna be a ""dumb blonde""...? xD

Not an insult! I'm talking about someone like Bitch-sensei from Assasination Classroom.

Omg I really love this story please develop the romance between the two. Also I disagree I’m a college history professor and I’m super childish. Chinatsu is fine the way she is and is unique in her own quirks and ways that does not mean she is a Mary Sue. Please though if you have the next few chapters just post them I’ve read this story 4 times already and really love it and I find myself always comming back to it.

I really enjoy this story, but this not where I believed it was going. The chapter where she went from Kakashi's house to the woods was the turning point of what I thought would happen. It's definitely more like the Shinobi War in atmosphere even before the fighting starts. I thought Chinatsu would be treated as a weird alien civilian for Kakashi to continue to study and bond with. I don't hate how it's going, but it is surprising.

I also have to add to Stockholm Syndrome theory. She was tested on and treated terribly. Kakashi straight up abandoned her like his Third Shinobi War days. I honestly don't think he deserves her at all. Obito and Naruto would never have allowed her to be treated the way she was. At this point, I'm rooting for a Chinatsu/Madara pairing. He's not the nicest, but he has gone insane. He definitely has more of an excuse than Kakashi. I'm rooting for Madara to bond with her and realize his plan may be slightly bonkers. I could see them use a space-time ninjtsu and traveling back pre-Konoha to change the future. I ship them.

This story is amazing! I always check to see if you’ve updated since 2years ago! Please update!

You had me giggling out loud throughout the story with her childish antics I liked it. I like the slow development with her and Kakashi it felt more canon for me. It's a nicer and different pace from the instant pairing from the other stories I read. I hope to see a future update but I know how hard it is to get back into a neglected story. Thanks for the awesome story!

please update

Okay here are my thoughts on the story thus far...
Is it great? No, I can’t say it is. Does that mean it’s bad and you (as a reader or the author) should give up on it? Fuck no. Here, let me explain.

To cut to the chase; this story is pretty rough. There’s miss spellings, some poor word choices, and some things in the plot are weird (like Tsunade expecting her to be genin level in a week when most start at a young age and it typically takes years for them to be deemed at an appropriate level). That’s just some of the things that poke out to me.

BUT- and that’s a huge but- I see its potential. I really just think some rework will do it worlds of good. And maybe see if you can pick up a good beta reader to help you edit and smooth things out. Someone who’s used to editing stories will probably do this fic a world of good! Not just editing it yourself helps catch errors that you wouldn’t have seen before.

Lordy knows when I write I need an editor cause my thoughts get all jumbled and come out as a mess when writing stories/papers and such...

The short of it is that I like the story. It needs work, but I like it. I just... wish you the best of luck with this story. I really do. So I’m sorry if any of what I said came off as... sorta like an asshole decided to review your story. That really wasn’t my intent. If I didn’t like any of it then I wouldn’t have read it the whole way through. So keep moving forward and improving. I know you can do note:There maybe parts of Chinatsu’s personality I don’t like but I just chalk that up to her being how you want her to be and not some writing error so I go along with it. Also coming from a 21 year old who had sort of a mental break down, dropped out of college, is still relatively immature and childish, and still hasn’t really found any permanent employment, so I don’t have a lot of room to talk.

It was wonderful reading this, i loved it a lot. Couldn’t even put it down from the moment I started reading itI was intending to skim through the first chappie and read it later, and Guess what? It’s actually 2.54 am now.

jfc I laughed so hard reading this. Reading this actually brought me out of my head for the day that it took me to read and I honestly hope you continue updating this story. Your humor is extremely appreciated. side note: I'm in my 20s and can be completely immature at times also. and personally if I was transported into the Naruto-verse not knowing Japanese, was tortured (pretty sure people keep forgetting that she was, in fact, TORTURED), constantly being kidnapped AND have to deal with a period without midol: I'd be pretty fuckin childish to people showing me any amount of affection.