I loved this; such a good take on the spoiler. Now, if only.

This was an amazing one shot! Honestly I can't get over how good it was. You delved so much further into their emotions than just the underlying plot. I loved it so much.

Wow this story is so amazing and the song that you have picked fits them perfectly the lyrics really speak writing on your part and the way you described their feelings,anguish and pain was just so you for sharing such an amazing story with us

I loved this beginning! I loved how you got the angst down perfectly. I loved how the longing for each other was so excruciatingly beautiful but terrible too! I loved how Kate finally made a decision and searched out Rick at the Old Haunt. I loved how Rick was confused if Kate was real or another of his tricks his mind played on him. I loved how Rick finally was convince she was real. I loved the idea that words were unnecessary but actions were. I loved the Kiss filled with longing and passion! Please continue!

I really love it. Really really.

I wrote something similar a couple of days ago - I was planning to post tomorrow - but this is so much better!

I love getting both points of view and all of their emotions. Great job.

absolutely loved it! very in character... nice piece :D

That was beautiful. I really loved it!

Well done :)