It's really good, good work!

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD:)
You are very good, I don't like fanfics but I really really liked it:) It is realistic and yeah I just really like it:)

Very nice. I love this introspective stories. But answer me, please, do you really believe this? I've been trying to figure out why didn't she look at him and I even listened to the podcast with the writers, but it ended before this scene (it was damaged, I think). I don't know if there is even a reason. It was a beautiful fanfiction and I think maybe she did realize something, I don't know what, though.
I thought that maybe it was metaphor (sort of). She knew exactly what Duke was to her and that's why he looked at her and she looked at him. Chris and her didn't share too much intimacy an that's why his back was at her. And she didn't know what Nathan was to her, yet, but he did. That's why he looked at her and she didn't.
I don't know if it makes sense, or if it is too old too look at it again, but even then it bothered me so much!

I hope you write a sequel! I really enjoyed this story. The characterization felt true to life.

OH I really liked this-and i'd like to think these are her true feelings on everything. In my head it most definitely is. Great job, please link me whenever you write more xo Laura (prettybutt)

I loved the story, keep up the good work, apparently you have a nack for it ;)

Very good descriptions of the character's feelings in the moments. I liked your story. Too bad in the next 2 episodes they didn't address any of this.

Good work. Keep up the writing.

Great story, hard to believe it was your first one. Keep up the great work.

I could really picture Audrey thinking in this manner. Great job!

This was SO great. I always like to see Audrey's point of view and you hit her character perfectly! Are you continuing with this? Please do.