I think this story has died a very untimely death...

A damn shame. I loved where it was going, I loved the characters, the interaction, the fight scenes... Watfics, please continue this. I'll be hanging onto hope.

Can't wait for the next chapter

I see what you meant be longer yet shorter at the same time :) as you said in chapter 24's author notes

When the next chapter coming out? Please let it be soon!

You forgot to mention Halloween. HOW COULD YOU FORGET HALLOWEEN?! FREE CANDY, MAN!

My craziness aside, this chapter was chock full of interesting. Not that the others weren't, but I just got caught up on reading, so I'm just going to comment here.

I'm curious as to who That Little Bitch is that Valerie mentioned. At first I thought it was Aelita-the scenario Valerie described seemed awfully familiar to me, and since Valerie is romantically involved with Brian, she would obviously be jealous of him spending so much time with another girl-but then I realized she was talking about something that happened a while ago. Also, if Brian has a girlfriend, why does he have romantic feelings for Aelita? I get that Brian is overseas and can't see Valerie, and I can understand him developing a crush on Aelita, but if he acts on his feelings, I'll be waiting gleefully for him to get burned. I'm sorry but it's true.

As for plot...I LOVE IT. I have no idea what Brian is planning and I can't wait to find. Please update soon! I don't wanna be in suspense.

Just keeps getting more interesting

This is getting better and better. Update soon

Good chapter update soon

You really wanna see how much things can change in a day? Go read Homestuck.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

can yo make this a yumixwillam fic to?

I frikin love your story.

I really like your writing style.

I've returned after a long break from reading CL:FR (stopped at 'Thinking of you, wherever you are' - I think I needed a break from the drama P ), and I've gobbled up all the chapters you've produced since. I finish, and learn that just as I come back, you're leaving for a time! The best and worst possible situation, at once. ) In any case, great job on Season II.

As you can probably guess from my previous reviews, your Season III preview has me insanely excited. I can't wait to see the team operating in (very) unfamiliar territory compared to the show - going places the original could not is, in my opinion, the greatest virtue of fanfic. Thanks for writing and I plan to be here again in a few months time!

"Go to hell."
(Brian takes out switchblade) "After you."

Oh my God, the drama! The suspense! The romance! The "Odd breaking the fourth wall" running gag!

Why can't you update sooner?! DX

You're a Hayate the Combat Butler fan too? You are just full of surprises, watfics.

A few mistakes in this one, but nothing that can't be overlooked or fixed. You just forgot to put a comma in for dialogue, like this:

"Um, no problem. Most of the time it seems to be you being the hero and saving me. So I thought I'd return the favour" she replied bashfully.

That's about it. Can't wait for the next chapter.