The scene at the park was absolutely wonderful! I’ve often wondered how their relationship would have come together and you wrote it beautifully. Very true to character, innocent, but connected...just so good!

Great job! This makes watching the break up even more painful!

I really think that this rrally should happen in the series.. :) Love it... I love the helmet scene..

Best representation of Usagi and Mamoru read to date. And to be fair I have read thousands.

sweet as always.. you are amazing writer

This is one of the best stories I've read.. No joke.. I get goose bumps...

Oh that was sweet.

One of my favorite stories. Your writing in incredible!

Sailor Moon new anime has already aired three episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube and episode 4 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs this Saturday. Great

This was such a good segue into the R arc. All I can think of is the very first episode where Chibiusa appeared, and Usagi thinking "Lucky!" as she stumbled into Mamoru's arms from the boat while on their first actual (anime) date. That fact that this was their first actual date (despite the various bouts of snogging they managed to get in the first week _), makes her blushes more understandable. And it makes the whole break up scene a few weeks/days later even more heart-wrenching.

Thank you so much for thinking of this and sharing it with us! Totally on my Favorites list. _

you're an absolute genius in writing up short fics surrounding actual anime episodes. you give the episodes depth and soul.

whipped on the 5th day!

I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for writing!

I love this fic, it was so sweet and so angsty in that you know he will end up breaking up with her. Great job!

Manga line stealer ;) lol no jk...this is probably like the 6th time I've read this and I'm sooo sorry I didn't review before I dont know what was up with me but here I am now saying how awesome this is and all...are you gonna makea sequel(like an AU or something) cuz I would read it