That as an amazing amazing ending! i actually feel like crying myself ya know! that was such an awesome story! LOVED IT!

I honestly don't know what to write anymore. You're story got my feelings all jumbled up. I was happy and sad at the same time! Is that even possible? The way you wrote it is very touching. I really agree that love has no age because in my experience, I found my first love when I was 13, no joke. 8D Their roller coaster kind of love really shows most of the relationships best friends have.

It's very sweet how unlikely their love was at first and how they still kept the communication going after what has happened to them. You know, it should always be like that. Stupid fights shouldn't get in the way between friends and most especially best friends.

I thought you were going to end it like that, both of them remaining as friends and I was really surprised when I read that there were still the last sentence saying they're engaged! Nice way to end it. I love it. Good job on your first fanfic. Your future is very bright. :))

Much love,

Mishie Eru

Love the story. :)) So smooth and sweet.

I love the essay's title. xD Language Arts.

Love it. :)) That's all.

The story is really good...starting on a tragic note but then ending on a happy one...so, good job on that :)

The story line is interesting too, so i suggest that you continue on with the chapters grounding on their past experiences with each other...or maybe you could stick to the past...announcing their marriage...no pressure :)

You could also add a bit of romance here...but not only with couples like Natsume and Mikan, Ruka and Hotaru...try something different...

Im just voicing out my opinion, so i guess there is a reason why you must have rated it T for future preferences...

Overall, you are a good writer and i hope you continue writing... :)

Keep thinking...your creative skills are amateur, but you'll get there :)

Love it :D

beautiful. lol, I really like it(: and i'm gonna continue my story, btw.

That was so sweet and touching and all these other adjetives that make me want to barf :)

I don't recommend that you keep going with this story, just because I think that it would draw away from this chapter. This little one-shot is beautiful all by itself.

Love,

yue679

Beautiful :DD

good story ithink u should write another chap

:)

That was soooo sweet I wanted to cry but there r alot people in the room plz plz plz make a sequel

wow! i am your first review, truly the story is great and sooo touching ~! i liked the way you described the emotions and the ending was great! at least mikan and natsume and back together, but i wonder how? anyways good story. hope you luck.

- ML