bruh 2013

Why did ypu stoo writing thjs story just the four chapters posted here are noval worthy

His how / how his shinobi behave.

please continue with the story. This story has one of the best plots ever used in a fanfiction. I really like the fact that just because Naruto is from Konoha, the village doesn't become a place of saints and monks. It is first of all a ninja village, and in that line of business you can be at the top only by being the best at this cut-throat job. I don't know why Hashirama is always portrayed as a paragon of peace, brotherhood and humanity. People always forget that he was the dictator of a ninja village. Ninja meaning a group of immoral, money-minded, sneaky mercenaries who will kill everyone and their mother to achieve their mission. Obviously such a powerful ninja doesn't remain alive merely because he powerful. Otherwise there are many ways to kill powerful people indirectly via seduction, poison, assassination and many more methods. which are available to all shinobi villages. To be alive so long shows that he was one ruthless motherfucker among all those other motherfuckers. And Konoha remaining at the top in such business means that they used each and every means to obtain their position including sabotaging their allies and enemies alike, stealing techniques from them and making backdoor plans to weaken other nations.

Why did you make Naruto a dumbass? Hes exactly like the villagers now always blaming Kurama for their problems, like seriously wtf

Sooo a old bat that would flop over like hiruzen and die pushed naruto this much... Can i find a hitman to come kill you? We don't need humans as stupid as you to reproduce. It becomes a stain on our race.

Update please

I'm severely fucking disappointed in your inability to understand infinity.
Infinite chakra infinite durability, survivability, age, power, speed, reaction, energy. He also should either have Absolute Perfect Chakra Control, or be unable to use anything less than infinite chakra when using it, as the more chakra you have, the worse your control over it.
Also, why the fuck are you limiting him to sound speed? (340 m/s) He could very fucking easily move at lightning speed. (50'000 to 4'000'000 m/s)
Hell, he could even move at the speed of causality (299'792'458 m/s) since he has infinite chakra, although that would probably turn him into a black hole, if his physical chakra allows change.

great

Why would erasing Naruto's name from the contract cause Naruto to forget he can summon toads? Sounds like a convenient way to pull out a way to surprise him in the future.

very good story

This is a nice story don’t just stop here

Great job please continue it

Muito bom esperando por mais.

hey i liked the story very much
please continue