The grammar it hurts. It hurts so bad.

I love hinata here she’s so evil .

dude its "no pain no gain" don't worry though I thought it was no pain no game for 10 years

Knew! not new, hinata did not new, she knew! please check for spelling mistakes. I love your story though.

Well, I reached chapter 14 of this story and I like it.
I also love Hinata and her domination. So awesome!
Now I gotta know what happens next!

Uh wow... there are a shit ton of grammatical errors all over these past few chapters. I know this was completed a long ass time ago but I would very much like to see a rewrite version of this story and the few stories after this. Great concept for a story but it has hard as hell to read.

I remember seeing it before (I have, in fact, read it), but I've read so many fanfics (some good, some bad, some in between) that the name actually eludes me. Mind telling me the name? I feel like re-reading it.

Interesting. I see a lot of stories with a dark/dark-ish Naruto paired with Hinata, but I don't see too many with both of them being dark.

I LIKE IT! (Mainly because I'm a bit of a sadist, so I take pleasure in seeing Sasuke, Sakura, in some cases Kakashi, or anyone else that I deem deserves it get the living shit kicked out of them.)

So good , i will cry when it ends

a looked that it has only 3 chapies :(

Still good , i thnik you should post it on the watpad to gain more attention

I Read 2 chapters , but i think its good :D

please post volume 2 this story is sooooooo goooood!

Love it.

What's the picture from? Deviantart or something?