Excellent, great plot, wonderful characters.

I can’t express in words how good this is. I have been left speechless. Good job!

very nicely done. this is one of the best NCIS stories i've read.
you nicely captured everything i felt about abby though the seasons. and portrayed the relationship between Zivia and Tim that only got touched on in the show.
you have very good character development.
there were moments where i was annoyed at your character portrayal, more on their self-discovery and lack of response to it. there was a lot of potential for tim/gibbs conversation that never happened - honestly it wouldn't have added anything so i see why it wasn't written.

what a fantastic story.

OMG! You made me cry so hard. Such an amazing story.

Great story!

This was a wonderfully written tale. Good job.

Good as heck story. I loved this story this is my second time reading it it's really good sad as heck though but good.

This is a great story. I really enjoyed it. LOL it's funny how so many writers that love Tim's character see him in the big chair. In reading Tim fan fic I see a whole different side to the character that I've watched on TV for so long. Thanks for writing.

Good story. No way would Tim be allowed water or anything else after abdominal surgery and especially surgery on his intestine. No way. NG tube in his nose sucking gastric juices from his stomach for several days. No food or liquids, minimal ice ships only.

Good story...except...yeah again except the milk on Tony's head. Just dumb. But a good story.

Good story... except the Air Force does not do protection detail and even if they did definitely not for a federal agent.

awesome (X 10) love the way you create the charector of the story and piece the people in it so believable to their cannon charector. thanks for sharing

It makes absolutely no sense whatsoever to have one of McGee's former tormentors assigned as his security. Roger should not be allowed on this case. Ridiculous.

Ouch! Excellent presentation. Good story idea.