I know this is a one shot, but I think it'd make a very interesting longer story. You described Snape how I've always imagined him, and he responded how I think Snape should. Also, I think you described being a teenage girl with a crush beautifully.

This is great. :) So, so sad and the description was excellent. I dont think I've ever actually connected with a character in a One Shot, because it's so short, but in this story I did. You should defintely continue writing more. Ill definitely be a fan! :D

Very good! Realistic I might add. It seems every fic I see has poor Severus being led aroung by his Johnson evertime some chick bats her eyes. This sounds like him. Poor girl, I know just how she feels:)

this is rated M?

lol i love it tho.

its a nice break from all the nasty one

Wow... that was indeed a very realistic Snape love story (If you can call it that!). You write very well, and I love how you so perfectly portray Severus Snape. I DESPISE the stories where his heart soften to the degree that you don't recognize him anymore. Though I would love for this to be one of those stories where the girl after a long and painful struggle finally receives his awkward love this was strangely refreshing. Did she kill herself in the end? Thank you for sharing this story! )

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Oh this was just delicious. This is THE most realistic snape/student scenario and it is cruel and harsh and just wonderful.

Poor girl. So would be me in another life lololol well done :) *faves*

You should turn this into a story.

Very well written. I enjoyed it. Hope to see more of your works.