Reviews for Psyche Complement
Guest chapter 12 . 6/5/2015
THIS HAS BEEN SOOOOO GOOD I WISH THERE WAS ANOTHER CHAPTER I MEAN I AM A HUGE FAN OF... could someone do me a favor and try to see how there names would sound if you combinded them. Thank you very much anyway IM A HUGE FAN OF...WELL THEM BEING TOGETHER ANYWAY I MEAN SO ANYWAY SORRY I WISH THERE WAS ANOTHER CHAPTERw SO YEA HANDS DOWN THIS WAS PRETTY AWESOME. sorry for yelling w
Guest chapter 10 . 6/5/2015
It was a very long chapter but it was still good
Guest chapter 9 . 6/5/2015
AWESOME! YAY!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/5/2015
like it these are really nice
Guest chapter 6 . 6/3/2015
YEAH!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/3/2015
Sure thing i Love this
Guest chapter 4 . 6/3/2015
I CANT WAIT!
angelstarhikaru chapter 3 . 5/3/2009
Oh my goodness, how did you know of Silat? Your fanfiction is the first one I've stumbled across that has silat in it. Amazing! I'm from Malaysia, as I'm sure you can tell by now. ;)

Pardon my rudeness, but if I may be so bold as to correct a couple of things? Actually, Pentjak is spelled as Pencak, and the term Pencak Silat is only used in Indonesia, while we in Malaysia just call it Silat. I hope that clears it up. :)

Your fanfics are wonderful and well-written. Thank you. Also, I see no spelling nor grammar mistakes at all. Of which I am immensely grateful for. I really appreciate it. If time permits and ideas strike you, please write more. I look forward to it. _
Nofret chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
I took the liberty to correct your Spanish diction, I hope you don’t mind.

“Por supuesto que soy fiel a su causa, señor Velásquez. Y transportare su cocaína a los Estados Unidos por usted en dos días.”

“Muchas gracias por su cooperación, señor Michaels.”

“Nos veremos en Los Ángeles en una semana.”

If you ever feel you need help in that way, I’d be happy to lend you a hand.

Nofret.
NiteAngel chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
guess who! yup. yours truly.

ok. i love the way you start off each of these stories with the ending of their previous mission so we get the idea that they are infact quite good at their job and it sets the scene for the rest of the story.

i liked Kunzite's reaction to Mina's behaviour or what she said and so on and yeah...

and i liked the spanish. it IS spanish rite? my folks speak spanish but they're Indian and it's all very complicated. lol.

ok. i hope you like long reviews cos i certainly do but that doesn't mean every1 likes it tho. if you don't then...well...too bad cos it's too late cos i've already posted it but you can always delete it but i hope you wont.

ok. the most important thing i want to say is that i think you're so talented in these kinda writing that you could write a book and send it off to the publishers and they'd publish it for you but i'm also glad that you're writing fanfic. cos there are so many books out there that i probly won't find your book.

i REALLY mean it. i haven't found errors. your formatting is great. and i should know cos i was doing professional writing (fiction) got a story published myself and i can recognize talent when i see one. if other can't then they have sumthing wrong with them.

kk? hope you feel extra extra special now although i'm not writing this to make you feel special. i'm just writing down my opinions and thoughts truthfully. therefore you should feel extra special (X6)

but gotta go now...again! even tho i don't want to cos my sis wants to leave

catch,

NiteAngel



ps. don't look up my name and find the stories that i've written cos they were done b4 my writing course and it's soo bad now tt i look back on it that i wouldn't want ne1 to read it but i can't delete them and start over cos sum ppl like it but newayz...

bye till next time!
kurobane chapter 12 . 4/24/2005
Excellent excellent excellent! I'd read Covert Cooperation on Generals Love back when Lady Mars was still updating it, but I had no idea you'd written the stories of the other senshi as well. I just wanted to let you know that for some reason, I didn't like High Explosives as much as Covert Cooperation, even though Sailor Mars is one of my favorite characters. This one, however, was terrific - loved it. Thanks for continuing to write senshi/shitennou stories! :goes off to read your three new stories:
firegoddess372 chapter 12 . 3/7/2005
I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work.
Shy Girl1988 chapter 12 . 11/28/2004
aw mina n kevin (kunzite) they are indeed my favorite senshi/general pairing, but in ur series i still luv ami n zoisite more...hehe...but nonethe less mina n kevin were adorable...oo i was so into u're plot in this one...who stupid evil esmaurade! the nerve of trickin lonely naive women like that...sickenin...n then auctionin off their virginity to sick bastards online...*tear* so sad...i'm so glad she's dead! newho...onto the next part of ur series hehe

keep up ur awesome stories...hope u write more senshi/general fics hehe...
Enchanted Flower chapter 12 . 1/4/2004
oh~so sweet.
evil esmaurade bitch...i hate her...
write more fic! i love senshi/general pairing, since they're rare.
Kitsune Moonstar chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
I love this story. It very original with the idea of the senshi and generals as secret agents. I noticed it's part of a series, so I'm off to read the rest of them. Another wonderful AU.

Kit
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