| Reviews for You May Now Kiss the Groom |
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   Adopate chapter 2 . 12/23/2016 It's beautiful! I love how it flowed evenly and the plot kinda wove together. I'm a very picky critic..Not for a job but as a person, and this story had a lot you could just love about it. Especially the fact it started in a tool shed. It's a lot coming from a highly matured child..(I'm no where close to the age restriction. But who cares, I don't use auto correct and I draw erotic scenes of SasuNaru, so what the hell.) But if I'm anything to go by, I'd say this is a fan fiction worthy of praise. |
| Kokoa Kirkland chapter 2 . 9/28/2016 Well, they've got fantastic sex (? |
| Moriyasha Neko-hime chapter 2 . 4/23/2016 No rocks, more like confetti will be thrown at you. I like that you added a second part, leave me feeling less futile about them. A regular thing in SasuNaru, but I still enjoy when they try to work things out. Love it! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/21/2016 I liked it, it was cute the second part is my favorite |
| cary99 chapter 2 . 7/27/2015 Awesome story |
| cary99 chapter 1 . 7/27/2015 Love the chapter |
| Stippled chapter 2 . 7/20/2015 I like it :) you should make it an actual story |
| yaoihime22 chapter 2 . 10/20/2014 I love it all of it . I wouldn't mind a few extras |
| Killua17 chapter 2 . 7/10/2014 I wanted to see Sakura meet Naruto, it would have been epic! XD |
| Coulorless Rainbow chapter 2 . 12/27/2013 No, no. Good job. |
| narusasumocha chapter 2 . 12/12/2013 i think its good a little forced but still very good i dont thinks it an abomination but i was never a good judge but still i think your a fantastic write and i hope you continue to write and i would be glad to read more of your stories |
| kittycatluver chapter 2 . 9/11/2013 This is not an abomination! It's beautiful! It's a work of art! It's sexy, hot, erotic, and so f***ing orgasmic! Great story keep it up! I will soon be writing my own stories and I need great advise and support from autors like you. I'll have many names besides this one. Well until next time. Ja Ne! |
| MoonIllusion chapter 2 . 8/23/2013 It doesn't seem fake :/ Its awesome! I fricken love this story. Your an incredible writer :/ it saddens me that you think this chapter is crap when in fact it's really good... |
| Nica8860 chapter 2 . 7/29/2013 I just wanted to point out that I'm reading this at 6:32am and I haven't slept either... MY Life... But I liked the fict though I was slightly upset in the first part where Sasuke married Sakura.. And then in the second part where Naruto had Sai as his ex... Not that I don't like the pairings but you know SasaNaru. Still I enjoyed it. :D |
| matsujun chapter 2 . 7/10/2013 Nah I stilll loved it! |
