| Reviews for The Beginning |
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   Kaitlyn634 chapter 1 . 12/20/2019 you should continue it good |
| Kaitlyn634 chapter 7 . 12/20/2019 i like this story it really good |
| Chai08 chapter 7 . 2/10/2019 Hello! I started reading today, and I'm very excited I already know that I should read the dates, since 8 years ago Anyway, I'm glad someone wrote something so beautiful. Thank you |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2016 a blue clownfish is called a Electric Blue Clownfish |
| samus18 chapter 7 . 2/10/2015 I know you wrote this years ago, but I desperately hope you can find it in yourself to continue it someday. XD It was one of the better Shark Tale fics I've ever read, and I'm so sad it ended... :) |
| samus18 chapter 5 . 2/9/2015 It's funny to imagine Feinberg doing all the things he does in this story... XD That tired old face from the movie sure had me fooled! |
| samus18 chapter 4 . 2/9/2015 Super-interesting chapter - can't wait to see how the relationship between Don Lino and Melanie progresses. :) Lol at the characterization of Don Feinberg. XDD |
| samus18 chapter 2 . 2/9/2015 I feel sorry for poor Melanie; so confused and unable to understand what's going on. This story is getting better and better - can't wait to find out what happens next. |
| samus18 chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 I'm loving this so far, it's very precious, well-written, and I already adore Melanie. _ |
| Anthony W chapter 1 . 4/3/2012 Actually, it cannot be your FIRST fanfic, because you already done "A Great White Lie". |
| GeneralLee01Girl chapter 7 . 12/16/2011 Wow. This is coming along rather good. I really like this story! But Don Feinberg, when will he learn. And Cookie Cutter Sharks are weird looking. But I sense love in the water...do they start dating or something later? If they do, I can't wait! Btw, are you going to update your other story soon? The suspense is killing me! |
| GeneralLee01Girl chapter 5 . 10/18/2011 Oh Lino is in love...wonder how Melanie feels about him. And nothing was wrong with chapter 4. Your doing great writing your first story! |
| GeneralLee01Girl chapter 4 . 10/15/2011 Aww...you haven't stopped writing your story now have ya? You got a good start. |
| killer18B chapter 4 . 10/14/2011 Is it me or you stopped writing your story? |
| justcruisin'along chapter 1 . 9/8/2011 Omg! What's going to happen next? |
