I love this. and can't wait for the next chapter! in a way I am kinda hoping this end well and lelouch get his wish for a better Britannia (just without dying for it).

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Update soon

UPDATE PLEase

cant wait for their meeting!

please update..this fic is wonderful! ive been dying to read one about Lelouch returning to his family :)
love it

So, I was just talkiing to you on Verisimiliitude, but I fiigured I miight as well drop a reviiew here as well. Liike many others have saiid, I really liike the plot that you have set up here! Can't waiit to see where you are goiing to take thiis, because iit seems liike you have a lot of good iideas roamiing around iin your head. :heart:

Keep iit up!

Pretty great story so far, cant see any faults really like how you write this story..

MAke Jeremiah his personal knight and put Suzaku in his royal guard! XD! That will be AWESOME! X3!-CAel!

Yep! Since Jeremiah is so loyal and would do anything to save Lelouch and since Suzaku cant be Knight cus he is Japanese, but he can be in his royal guard! XD! -Taiyo

And beside Jeremiah will kill for Lelouch and do whatever he wishes, but Suzaku will kick asses with the Lancelot and with his knowledge of martial arts! XD! X3!-CAEL

Ciao! XD! -Taiyo

This story... It are awesome. :3

He lives! YES! YES! YES! Anyways, there are some grammatical errors, however I love it when Clovis survives, partially because it's shown that he is the brother that loves him the most (I'm talking biological, so Rolodex doesn't count) When you first watch the anime, Clovis' death is more like an "Okay then, let's move on" moment, but when you dwell on it more, it's really tragic and sad. Thank you for making this story. There's not enough Clovis fanfictions out there. Please continue! )

I love the way the story goes on... I hope you will make a little longer story and update fast... that's all :) NICE STORY!

Oh man! I like this so far! You could do with slightly longer chapters, but even so, I like this idea, I never would have thought of it. Good luck and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I like the idea of this story, but there are so many grammar errors and lack of description that it's hard to read. I would suggest that you try, above all, to find a beta. It would not fix everything, but it would be a start. Until you can find one, you might try to put punctuation on your sentences, watch out for run-ons, capitalize dialogue that begins in the middle of a sentence, and add more description as well as chatter. Also, you seem to be moving a little fast, jumping from topic to topic. I hope you can update soon.

Hope this didn't come off as a flame; I didn't mean for it to seem like one. You have good ideas, just not the best execution.

Can't wait for the next chapter to come out.

But to make Clovis Leloulch's pawn now this is interesting.