THIS.
Everyone is either completely miserable or blaming themselves, and then Hermione comes in and starts talking about it logically. I love it.
George's thoughts made for the perfect ending. "But that day is not today." It shows him moving past his grief, however slowly he may be doing that, and hoping others will do the same.
This is excellent, and I must say once again:
THIS.

Crying so much rn

This was beautiful.

I cried through the whole thing.

You truly captured the greif and loss of such a glorious soul.

Well done. Well done indeed.

Is it okay that I cried during this? Cause I did. I really did. Guah, it's been four years since I read the Deathly Hallows and three months since I watched the very last movie (heartbreak)and I still get so emotionally at the talk of Fred's death. This is so amazing! You captured everyone's attitude towards his death in the most perfect way possible! Keep up the great work!

And P.S. This has been added to my favorites. I hope that gives you a good feeling inside. :'D

That was a really amazing and well thought threw story. I love how each person was written exactly to their personally and education and effectiveness to the death of such a loved character. Each person was well thought threw and descriptive. It was so sad and heartfelt. I loved it and i will definitely read it a few times more :)

I love this! You wrote everything out of the exact perspectives of the characters in your writing without any flaw or uncharacteristic mistakes. The way you presented their thoughts was extraordinary. I liked the last one the most. "That day isn't today" implies many emotions such as regret, fear, sorrow, and most of all, pain because of loosing best friend and loyal companion. You showed how the characters felt using subtle descriptions of how the characters felt, such as Ron laughing when Peeves was singing the crazy song, and Ginny thinking that Fred should have been there to sig the song along with obnoxious Peeves. The fact that Molly became even more frightened for the safety of her children overlaps really well with her crying on the stairs when she saw the boggart turn into dead bodies of Harry and her children. You have written with close relevance to the original series, and I love this!

This was really well written! You incorporated the first person point of view really well and made it flow nicely. Crammer and spelling was fine from what I could tell also. My favorite bit was George's part. You really dug deep into the emotional tragedy of the situation and executed it to perfection! Great job for your first fanfic!

I loved how emotional and striking this was. I felt their pain and I felt an overwhelming sadness. You did very well on this and George's POV was soooo sad. You did beautifully and incorparated the older Weasleys (the two eldest) in a way I wouldn't have guessed to do. Fantastic! :D

-Brooke

I'm having a hard time believing you're new to fanfic, because that was simple brilliant. You captured each character thought, feelings, and personality perfectly. I especially like that you included Harry and Hermione, since they're considered on of the family.

For someone who is new to writing, you really know the minds of the characters well. Each saying I pictured the character actually saying what you wrote.

This is fantastic and very well written.

It's sad, but I really like it.

I love stories about Fred after the war. I'm adding this to my favorite stories list.