I really liked it, it was nice.

Just a few spelling mistakes.

Otherwise, it was great!

Pretty good. Some advice: don't label things like flashbacks or POVs. Plus, check over your grammar and spelling, and invincible isn't the same as immortal. Also, Annabeth would probably just tell any Aphrodite guy to back off, unless it's to discuss business. Other than that, great work.

Well you should either stay in present tense or past or it gets sorta weird just a little advice but overall it was good and I love this song my best friend would love you too since she loves joe brooks okay toodaloo