Darn, that gives me an interesting idea for a story, with someone who doesn't like the way Sherlock treats people and decides to take it out on John. Every time Sherlock dismisses someone's injuries or puts them in a position to be hurt, the mysterious enemy organizes things so John has the same injury, until Sherlock figures out that people's lives are important, not just their deaths.

Ah of course..it takes John to make Sherlock acting human.
Love love love

:)

Great story. I liked it.

Nice and well written.

This was awesome! I love all of your stories. :D

Oh my goodness! This is amazing! You have captured both Sherlock and John to a T! They are both so in character. A very impressive feat for a very hard character to pinpoint.

thank you for giving me the pleasure of reading that :) i loved it!

I loved the connections between the two seperate stories :) And Sherlock's confusing emotions (at least to him).

found a typo:

"There was a strange feeling that consume Sherlock as he halted his dash, feet digging into the cobblestones of the cold London night."- consumeD

else, a good story.

the dialogue and interactions of watson and sherlock are in character here, john finally gets to prove his point in this story( though he didnt expecct it to happen like that) and i like the repetition of the sixteen stitches. a job well done.

there needs to be more sherlock stories like this. i like when the reader gets to choose if they wish to see it as a pairing rather than platonic and vice versa

Im going to be watching you now

Very nice. So perfectly in character. I enjoyed it very much! Thank you!

This is brilliant! Like, I can totally see this happening! It's told pefectly to the point, just like the famous Holmes thought process. (x

But anyway, yes, oh the irony! xD it's fantastic.

... I think you may have just made me a sherlock fan...

Your writing style is powerful. It gets the point across. (X

-Lilly