| Reviews for sinking in a stream full of dreams |
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   Explicitly Simple chapter 1 . 11/5/2011 Story is kinda confusing, so I was a little bit of confused about the Tori thing, but other than that I liked it. I really like the line about the the demon with with red scissors. |
| Explicitly Simple chapter 1 . 11/5/2011 Story is kinda confusing, so I was a little bit of confused about the Tori thing, but other than that I liked it. I really like the line about the the demon with with red scissors. |
| chasingafterstarlight chapter 1 . 8/29/2011 This is really lovely. I love your symbolism, AND YAY TORI DIED I'M SO HAPPY THOUGH. The constant repetition of snip was so rhythmic, and the grammar was nearly perfect. I really enjoyed reading it, and I lovelovelove your characterization of Cat- it was just awesome, okay. Love this and love you :D |
| itsallanoxymoron chapter 1 . 8/29/2011 : ) Ahhh youresofreakinawesome! This was wonderful! I ... Whah...so...awesome... Ahhh! Excuse me while I go re-read and bask in the glory of this amazing masterpiece. Superb grammar and lovely new writing style. Keep ritin foreva bookluva98 |
