This is soooo sweetttt and the epilogue is so hilarious LOL Good job Butz

That epilogue was hilarious. XD

God I love these two together... this fic was incredible

Amazing. I just . . . this was so amazing.

This isn't a fanfiction story, this is a goddamn novel.

Best thing I've ever read. I have no complaints whatsoever. Everything works perfectly, and I love how incredibly realistic your writing feels. This was just perfect.

Two words. Wild. Giggling. That about sums up my first yaoi experience.

Dude. That was.. um... I don't really know what to say. Your writing is great! Very.. uh descriptive, and wow. It's like I'm intruding their moment by reading this.

I seriously thought about reading this long and hard. I'm currently playing the game and reading this might change my views on the characters. And change they did. Damn.

Just so you know, I am a very avid MilesxFranziska fan. I haven't visited your page so I really really hope you have a fic about them . If not, PLEASE DO.

Omg, I laughed so hard at the ending!

So perfect! *-*
I'm in love with your fanfic, it's so sweet, and cute, and amazing! Aww, the prologue was so innocent, I loved the idea of the first kiss (thanks, Larry xD), and their reaction... How can anything be more cute than that?!
And the way they showed their feelings for each other after all those years... So beautiful. I also loved how both of them had the initiative, because that's how I imagine them, and it's kinda hard to find fanfics that describe them like that.
So, I really loved this. I wanted to say more about how much I liked it, but my english is kinda bad, and so is my "comment ability". But, anyway, thanks for the amazingly perfect and cute story. You're a great writer. x3

this. was. perfect. thank you so much, you made my fucking day! beautiful *tears of pure bliss*

I'm addicted! This may be my favorite story of yours- the build-up is excellent. You always balance the sweet and the erotic so well. I can see this Phoenix and Miles living happily together many years in the future. : )

I absolutely love your story! I loved your style of writing and how you potrayed all of the caracters really effectively. It was so cute, innocent and really hot... *fangirls*

OMG such a great ending! So good!

The epilogue was just adorably funny.

C-A

Oh my god. That was fucktastic. One of the best pxe Ive ever read. Amazing.

Excellent story! I'm not a fan of this couple or any couples at all from the game, and especially this one is really new to me and always make me blush...
Anyway, it was well written and a very good storyline. Also a few times made me laugh XD
Keep up the good work! :)