Aw, I really enjoyed this! You captured Remus' insecurity, and Tonks' determination to help him overcome it, very well. My favourite line was probably "The truth was a dangerous thing. The truth burned and slashed and poisoned, leaving a path of well-intentioned destruction in its wake." But I also really liked "Love and hate aren't so different." - very insightful.
Nice work!

Cute.

This was so wonderfully written. You captured their heart-wrenching emotions so perfectly. I applaud you.

But really, you did a great job with this one-shot and I really loved how you wrote it. It was just beautiful.

My favorite lines:

"No one can love a monster."

"I don't love a monster. I love a man."

and I like this one:

"Love and hate aren't so different."

"I want to keep you safe, and to do that, you have to hate me."

aww this was lovely (:

Thou my fav HP couple is Albus x Minerva, Tonks and Lupin are defiantly second (: this was really cute and i really enjoyed it. excellent job (:

Cheers!

xx Poisonous Strawberries

Aww really sweet story D

I'm a big fan of lupin and tonks and this story was really good, especially as a first one :)

Good one

That was beautiful. Awww...

This was very good. It was well written and thank goodness, it didn't have any spelling or other errors in conventions. I can't stand spelling errors. They give me headaches. Oh, and it was the perfect length. So, yeah, good job.