It's so lovely~ I liked it !
Thanks for sharing your fanfiction with us !
Good luck for next !
Gwen'

Very sweet

Aw, that was so sweet! I don't find too many Jessica x Kanon stories so it's good I found this one.

This is so cute! I could really picture Jessica doing all this, just to get Kanon's attention. :D

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I loved it! The characterization was perfect, writing was stunning, and I'm preeeety sure I squealed at the end when he was all like, "You look lovely"

Great job(:

Very, very cute little story - just the right amount of sugary fluff to satisfy without sickening. _ I love the way you've characterised Jessica and Kanon - especially the former, because you captured both her flustered, hot-headed side, and the insecure, sweet side too.

However, you might want to watch your tenses - the start was particularly jumbled, what with you mixing past and present tense. It was a little awkward to read, and didn't flow as smoothly. Just keep an eye on the tense of the story in future. _

Apart from that, though, it was a good piece of work. Interesting idea and written quite well.

KO xoxo

This is so adorable o:

I notice you seem to skip around with tenses a lot- it changes from past to present a little- but it's fine, and it doesn't detract from the quality of the story. Everybody's IC, and I love how Jessica is so self-concious despite her 'tough' image _;;