Interesting. I wish there was a bit more frienship between Lestrade and Mycroft on the show.

It seems John got a bit angry at the end.

I really enjoyed the fic. I like the way you portrayed Lestrade. I can totally picture Lestrade and Mycroft becoming friends after a few years of spying on Sherlock D

Just one thing though, it would really help if you put some sort of line between the different sections of the story, become otherwise it is difficult to tell what's a flashback (the transition is a bit jarring like that).