Hehe lovely, I can image how shocked Kero could have looked if his brother stole his pancake. XD

Pretty good name on the chapter, I think many would have loved seen something like this in the anime.

Hahaha poor Yue almost sound like he came to the house in a wrong moment. XD

I think this is perfect just the way it is. No actual need for a prequel nor a sequel in my opinion (because everything relating to Clow is bittersweet and double dosed with angst most of the time). I really love your fan fiction! Well, you probably won't be reading this, but it was great, and I really enjoyed it!

You probably won't ever come back to the fandom, but...just FYI, Clamp's coming out with a new CCS art book this March! *squeal* Just found out yesterday.

Three more chapters, and I honestly can't see how much better the ending of this fan fiction could get, really! Yue admits that his love for both Clow and Touya is everlasting and never fading while he became one with Yukito (something that's always bothered me). Yep, everything's perfect.

I guess the only thing that made me a bit sad was that the twins never came back. They were pretty great and acted as a great catalyst for Yue to show his softer and more private side.

I've always imagined Touya topping...but I ain't complaining. Nope.
I just like Yukito a bit more now! TBH, I started disliking him a bit after a few years CCS ended. Err, all's well ends well, yes?

I laughed so hard at your author's note at the end! You had to keep it clean because someone was next to you, lol. Yeah, I think we've all had that feeling.

Yay, Yue and Kerberos have their happy ending now! CCS always appeared super happy and feel good to me before, but now that I'm older, I realized that it's not all happy endings for everyone, so this chapter made me pretty happy.

The feels... *blows tissue*
This chapter...was awesome! I know, I probably said that about every other chapter, but really! The plot! It was great (though slightly disturbing in some parts). I'm relieved that this chapter makes sense with all the other chapters before it. I've read other fan fictions that were really well written too, but whenever they kind of go into flashback mode, they always trip over or neglect a few of the details mentioned before. There's nothing much to worry here.
I think Lunare is such an interesting character; a great antagonist for not only Yue but Clow. Lunare's flaming obsession with Yue only makes the moon guardian seem more desirable, and on the drama! It was totally great. Clow doesn't just sit around either, which is cool.

Woohoo! So Clow's relationship with Yue never had been a truly lost cause? This fan fiction isn't so angsty after all! The way you have everything settled (with the exception of Yukio's lack of knowledge on Touya's new relationship with his alter ego) really settles me. It's really pleasing, because Yue's not really angsting or suffering over Clow, and everything's going along swimmingly without it being at the expense of lonely people with unrequited love.

This was a really funny chapter; absolutely loved it! The part where Clow came back through Eriol was a nice touch, and I especially liked it when Yue was interacting with everyone and not just Touya. However, I must say that the part where he was eating the pancake in "almost sexual rapture" (lol), was especially nice.

Alright, that's a total relief that Yukito wouldn't remember. *phew* No need for the unnecessary drama. Now, if only Touya would be more honest with everyone. I really like how the relationship between Touya and Yue is developing right now. It's not too slow, and there's enough action to keep it interesting! I know, I sound like a perky old man, but for reals.

Drama llama! Touya, Touya, Touya, why is that nearly every fan fiction I read that involved you and Yue or Yukito always end up with you doing something wrong and stupid somewhere in the middle? The last part with the transformation was a really nice touch: where Yukito's eyes turned purplish and Touya immediately understood that it was Yue who was in control. I just wish he was more honest with Yukio, that would really help );

Yay! Some action going on there! But wow, the least Yue could've done was bring him inside and handing him a towel before transforming into Yukio, but I guess that's just how Yue is best portrayed.

Yeah, things definitely aren't as funny now, but it's getting really heart-thumping and really flirty! I love the interactions between Yue and Touya! Yue's still retaining his distance and apathy towards others while Touya's beginning to get fed up; I think this is a great catalyst for development. Nothing too OOC here. Really nice writing style too, the pace is nice. Can't wait to read more!

This fan fiction is just fun and funny! I wish I got into this fan fiction archive earlier! I mean, CCS has always been my first AND #1, but still...gur! Any who, I love how everything's starting right now, and I can't wait to read more. It's almost unbelievable that there's any angst in this fan fiction, especially when everything's so lighthearted and AWESOME. Just saying.