Good story

Are you continuing this?

oh and great job on the story

mystic rising actually some kids mature and start looking ateach other earlier and just because you was a late bloomer and thought girls were nasty at that age doesn't mean we all did so it is normal for some kids to mature earlier and twelve is right around the time most of us boys started noticing girls cuz that's the age girls started developing into woman

Ch 2
Wow, this pretty good. Only weird part about this chapter is how naruto praises hinata's body. For fucks sakes, they are still like 12. Naruto shouldn't be attracted to bodies and hinata shouldn't be that developed. I like seeing hinata stronger. Hope she gets trained by tsunade. I understand why it was team 7 only to inherit the sannin's teachings ( ino doesn't count. She learned healing but not tsunade's techniques), but I hate how weak hinata is compared to naruto. I love hinata x naruto, but reaaaally hate how weak hinata is. Like for couples they should be closer in power. Sakura is stupid (who doesn't use her strength during pain's invasion) but she is tsunade's heir, so she can stand as a partner to sasuke or naruto.

I am fine with canon sasuke's personality, but the whole friendship crap pisses me off. I mean why does naruto consider him to be his most precious, when he has formed much stronger bonds with everyone else back in the village. I like that we see these bonds develop, shiakamaru, chouji, kiba, aburame, and hopefully lee (neju, meh. He isn't a dick after the chunin exams, but I don't find him to be special, like personality wise he is so boring) are way better friends to naruto than sasuke. Anyways, those 2 (hinata weak, sasuke being trated like a god by naruto) are what I was ranting about.
But seriously, it is awesome seeing friendships develop, naruto gets strong (sadly, now people WANT him but not for who he is, but his power. They can fuck themselves), he is smart, skilled, compassionate. I just love this.

... this isn’t gonna be NaruHina, is it?

Great job please continue it

It feels just too set up

I find it ridiculous that the fox calls him Kit. It's like trying to humanize him.

man this naruto sounds a bit full of himself

i love how Sakura's mother hates Naruto at first and then after learning about the rinnegan, she suddenly wants Sakura to mate with him...just goes to show how power hungry and corrupt some people are

No more chapters? Five years and nothing?

me likey

Here lies
Sasuke Uchiha
Was on a team with two fan girls
?-?

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