There it is again with the Luna know it all. I'm sick of it.

shame this story is dead

Interesting work. Though i have to mention one thing: the black sword harry found in the troll barrow can't be Anglachel(Gurthang). That blade was broken when it's last master, Turin, killed himself after slaying the dragon Glaurung. And it's still broken in Turin's tomb that may or may not be off the coast of middle earth after the war of wrath(the vala defeating morgoth for good).

Why couldn't harry use feindfire? Juts burn em all and run!

Other than that, cool.

I really liked this encounter between the elven King and Thorin. Please update soon...

I'm absolutely loving this story so far. Its so detailed and the way that you've worded everything has most certainly drawn me in. I cant wait for the next chapter to be posted! :) :)

Fandamtabules!

More chapters please? Can't wait for the next update.

Please continue this story is great!

...you admitting to being unoriginal, does not justify being unoriginal.
Accepting a problem is fine but don't think that solves it
Yes Harry and Luna will change the story, but that's the point. If you wanted to keep this as Bilbo's tale, read the original story. If you try to make a crossover but also ty to stay faithful to the scenes that developed Bilbo, then you will fail at both.
You must choose one.

Love the story!

I really love your story! I really like that you made the Elvin King a more likable person.

Love the story. I hope you continue the story and continue to update

Excellent story can't wait for the next chapter

sweet chapter