Reviews for Champion of Olympus: Child of the First One
VAL chapter 25 . 4/9
GREATEST STORY
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
Yay I’m the 500th review
Magical mortal chapter 25 . 12/29/2018
I’ve gotta applaud you and any beta reader you had for this amazing series! It’s kept me up reading all night, and it had a very nice, but unexpected ending. Now, I’ll give you feedback for your entire series, since I literally skipped everything in excitement. There ARE some typos here and there, nothing noticeable at all. I see that you’ve give Percy a LOT of power, and Loki has a LOT of power too, but it’s a fanfic, so who am I to say that Percy could be OP or a hobo. I am confused about one thing though, and it’s probably because I skipped some sentences in a rush to finally read the end. Why was Percy’s eyes white when he fought the fire giants? Erm, that’s all, really. Sometimes, and I mean very rarely, there needs to be commas where commas should go, since there were no commas. Nice story! Beautiful and satisfying ending! I love it, keep on writing!
Magical mortal chapter 18 . 12/29/2018
Alright, I’ll just write something right here... NO! OH MY GOODNESS AND NOT SO VERY GOODNESS! THIS IS SO TENSE AND COOL! BUT MY HEART ACHES FOR THOSE THAT DIED IN THE BATTLE, EVEN IF THEY AREN’T REAL! JEEZ, JUST LET THEM ALL LIVE AND PROSPER! LET THEM WIN! And... I’m done! Off to reading the rest! Here I go!
KalthosNamikaze chapter 1 . 9/24/2018
This entire series has been a roller-coaster epic story and I can't wait to see what you do in the future
Guest chapter 25 . 1/2/2018
Im literally banging my head on my desk rn
I mean come ON,
cheyannetang2005 chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
I just realized that most of my favorite stories were all written by you... OMG! ! I LUV UR STORIES
Lord Pup chapter 25 . 6/6/2017
Best work I've seen in ages love the whole series most of what people read is your average run of the mill kind of stuff but this takes the cake and another ten with it so I'll say it again this is the best work I've seen in ages pat yourself on the back because it's a great mix of all of Rick's book series.
matmac chapter 22 . 4/9/2017
isn't nidhogg the monster that rips the bark off of the tree of life and feeds on it's sap :/
MLGPROGOD chapter 15 . 3/24/2017
only reason i know about draugr is from skyrim
Guest chapter 25 . 7/24/2016
i have read them all and i love them you could have a great future in writing i especially enjoyed the twist when he was the president but if i could make a suggestion it would be awesome if you made percy the god of fate and goodness that way he would always be there to protect people... it was just a suggestion thanks for the great stories
idkmyname chapter 25 . 7/19/2016
Why did it end. I loved it
jackalope33 chapter 25 . 6/9/2016
love this story! one of the only stories that do not follow the original storyline like glue! i like how the Norse come into play- never expected that. the Chaos helping was a little chiche but still ok. the chapter lengths dont do the story much justice (but hey! its still longer than mine, so who am i to talk?)
Darkfire99 chapter 25 . 1/28/2016
I read the whole story in less than a week and will probably read it again eventually good job
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 25 . 12/10/2015
A fitting end to this series here!
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