That was so breathtakingly beautiful. The descriptions of the Merlin's thoughts and the scene were so serene and so descriptive that I felt like I was there, it placed a feeling of clam in me that I'm still experiencing. My only piece of constructive criticism is that when they made love (because with them, especially in this story, that's what it is) it could have been described a bit better. I was caught a bit off guard when they started because there was no lead up or indication that their clothes had even come off ;) This story was definitely dedicated to the emotional side of their relationship so it's understandable that the M rating wasn't earned for full on smut but a bit more description would help the reader follow the part when Merlin and Freya make love (again, everywhere else you did a phenomenal job) better. A truly touching story. Keep up the great work.

That was lovely :)

That was one sweet little piece of writing, keep going!

That was just beautiful, especially the part about her being the keeper of his soul.
Please add more chapters. It would be cool to see how Freya helps Merlin and Arthur with their next adventure

Bravo!

This was beautiful. Romantically written and truly a great story. Merlin isn't the type of boy to get hot and heavy and that is what I love about his relationship with Freya. It's sweet and passionate at the same time, without being smutty. You did a great job at describing just that.

Loved it! Very poignant and sweet, just like Merlin and Freya were.