Well finally done although I'm sad/pissed you killed off Jeny. Although they didn't have that book for long, next time they shoudl just burn the damn thing or get a metal one with wards on it. (Willow coudl help with that)

Cool I would have reviewed sooner but log in was down for a bit yesterday. I just realized that there was no way for you to have known that Xander did lose an eye in the show, how freaky is that?

Although the metal eye thing reminds me of that game character Garrett in Theif, did that inspire that part or you just wanted to give him something like Ash?

CH1

Good hook and premise, but the meeting between Xander and Faith seems a

bit off. They really should have grabbed their stuff and then split while discussing

what their options where.

You used vast instead of fast in the end.

Good chapter.

CH2

Ash jumped to conclusions about Faith and Xander much too quickly.

He didn't have any info at that point. He should have guessed they

were already in a relationship if anything.

"Did you say the right words this time when you came back?"

LOL!

Jenny seems off.

CH3

So/So. The speech patterns for the characters are way off.

CH4

How do you maneuver yourself out of someone's grip when they have

a chainsaw a couple of inches from you without losing a limb?

Why would Jenny give any info to the badguys and why wouldn't she

fight to keep from getting taken?

CH5

When did Ash have any doubts about Xander being good for Faith?

CH6

Vamps don't have any bodyheat. Thermal would be useless.

The eye can't get wet? What?

CH7

Faith and Xander looked up at the form of the floating man in awe.

Why exactly would that awe them?

So/So ending.

Ok, this story is much better (formatting and all). Well...there's these odd square things on my computer and some of the text is all odd but that could just be me... So uh, anyways, good story. I'd keep up with this formatting..

Very good i like the story usualy i prefer B/X but i actualy like the whole F/X as well. i am looking forward to reading more of your work in the future

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OOh, love the ending. When's the sequel due!

Heh heh heh ... Evil Dead , Btvs , Xander , Faith and Ash. Mixed them all up and you get this sweet crossover. What else can you say but groovy baby ?

Lokking forward to starting on the sequel soon. For now I'll just hail to the king , Whitewerewolf for bringing in this out. :) Later bro !

Zauriel ...

Nice. You're good. More soon?

I LOVED THIS FIC PLEASE POST THE SEQUAL SOON!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!

Question. If the eye goes from his eyebrow to just under the cheek, then how will he go out in to public? Neather shades nor and eye patch will cover it, and it would be awkward to walk down the street and have everyone staring at this piece of metal in your head.

Just a thought. I do like the story.

You hurt Xander, but as long as you fix him good as new or better, I won't hurt you. HEH! Like the idea of the eye. Could it see better in the dark or something? Give Xander an edge. Really good chapter as always. Can't wait for more.

I'm really liking this... Even when I don't know anything at all about Evil Dead. I just hope it won't be impossible to keep on reading later.

PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!

Good chapter.

I like the flashback as it shows some of Faith's and Micah's past. I just have a little nag with it: as it is Micah having the flashback we shouldn't learn Faith's thoughts and se her feelings through his eyes.